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Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1046 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.27.88 Rating: N/A |
yaa! naaku ade anipinchindi. But, naaku general gaa korikalu peddagaa undavu. So... baadhalu peddagaa undavu. I have no idea what to write there 
I'm really glad to see this statement. I'd look forward to your review  (Review ante... ikkada DB lo na? leka Amazon lo naa?) The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1044 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.27.88 Rating: N/A |
oh! All the best The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1042 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.27.88 Rating: N/A |
It was pleasant - except for one simple reason. I wish there existed some kind of USB connection between the brain and my PC - so that I don't have to type anything :P The reason for a smooth flow is... I generally write blogs. And there are many things that I hate in others. And there is no end for hatred :P Its abundant. So... it was a free flow The links: about me, my book | ||
Analog Side Hero Username: Analog Post Number: 4244 Registered: 05-2008 Posted From: 97.99.104.4 Rating: N/A |
Nope Second half complete chesa....I could relate to Thought 91 kama,krodha,mada,matsarya ki inka better examples ivochemo..over all enjoyed reading it...will post detailed review later!! Thesis 100 pages rayatanike nana thatalu padthunna...aap mahan ho.. | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8834 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 107.77.94.64 Rating: N/A |
Saugham bro, When you get a chance, could you please elaborate on your experiences writing the book.. Was it tiring, pleasant or did you hit any road blocks any where.. For me the biggest issue is expanding 10 page material to say 60-70 pages.. Any tips you can give to overcome that.. Thanks Can we Indians even take Constructive criticism ? | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8833 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
oh...i am trying to know what is correct..atleast for my knowledge sake.. akkada unna exact words kinda itchan chudandi ...meeru cheppina usage kaadu... ///////////////////// This is the book I would like to gift to my daughter when she enters her teenage. ///////////////////// between saugham uncle....maa thammud ki ampan link..he is an avid reader than me...he said the concept was intresting and he will look to buy in next 2-3 weeks when he has his vacation..he is more of the age group the book is intended Can we Indians even take Constructive criticism ? | ||
Buduguuu Megastar Username: Buduguuu Post Number: 23400 Registered: 01-2012 Posted From: 172.72.3.200 Rating: N/A |
congratulations | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1041 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
Thank you bro The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1040 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
hehehe thank you The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1039 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
Ya. I was convinced that the 2nd to was not redundant. I don't understand why atta_boy objected to it The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1038 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
The book was more like... why my friends fell in love, and why I didn't so... never faced such situations. The links: about me, my book | ||
Lolligadu Side Hero Username: Lolligadu Post Number: 9800 Registered: 09-2012 Posted From: 103.245.198.90 Rating: N/A |
wow amazing brother..... ban Krishna_jilla for being a TT | ||
Yodha Side Hero Username: Yodha Post Number: 9562 Registered: 08-2011 Posted From: 207.244.77.1 Rating: N/A |
GrammarNazi  thesesa | ||
Platypus Side Hero Username: Platypus Post Number: 3328 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 125.62.196.162 Rating: N/A |
On the topic of "gifting" Usage 1: "Giving a gift to someone" - Here "gift" is a noun. Usage 2: "I want to gift you this teddy bear" - Here "gift" is a verb. I want to gift this book to my daughter" and "I want to give this book as a gift to my daughter" - both are correct. Naaku nacchindi janaalaki nacchadu... Janaalaki nacchindi naaku nacchadu... Nenanthe.. adho type. | ||
Yodha Side Hero Username: Yodha Post Number: 9554 Registered: 08-2011 Posted From: 207.244.77.1 Rating: N/A |
Book title adrindhi thesesa | ||
Prouddesi Side Hero Username: Prouddesi Post Number: 3888 Registered: 09-2014 Posted From: 122.169.207.86 Rating: N/A |
book rasavante chala opika and talent undali...super combo personal anukokapothe nee expericnces konni cheppu bro(db lo cheppagaligevi) ,,how did u handle the situations ... TDP + TRS is RULING ALLIANCE in RANGA REDDY ZILLA PARISHAD ,no permenant friends or foes,so chillax friends | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1037 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 14.141.91.20 Rating: N/A |
Bump to Analog PK kanipinchaadaa? The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1036 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 14.141.91.20 Rating: N/A |
Thank you The links: about me, my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1035 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 14.141.91.20 Rating: N/A |
amazon provides a "FREE" sample :P Here is the link... http://www.amazon.in/143-thoughts-about-love-problems-ebook/ dp/B018AVLGMG/#reader_B018AVLGMG The links: about me, my book | ||
Prouddesi Side Hero Username: Prouddesi Post Number: 3837 Registered: 09-2014 Posted From: 122.169.215.1 Rating: N/A |
all the best bhayya TDP + TRS is RULING ALLIANCE in RANGA REDDY ZILLA PARISHAD ,no permenant friends or foes,so chillax friends | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1034 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 14.141.91.20 Rating: N/A |
test1 The links: about me, my book | ||
Optionsgenius Junior Artist Username: Optionsgenius Post Number: 400 Registered: 12-2014 Posted From: 63.253.41.67 Rating: N/A |
super always encourage people who are trying. by the way Saughmraat- free ga book kavalli ani adagachu db la.esthara marri. | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1033 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 14.141.91.20 Rating: N/A |
test This link is about me. And this link is where you can buy my book | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1032 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
By the way... its not some story based romantic novel type. Its more like personality development type self help book. Its more about retrospection About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1031 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
Thank you About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1030 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 118.102.239.85 Rating: N/A |
hahahaha alaantidi emi ledu. okko cinema lo okka sceno valla okko thought ki beejam padindachu particular gaa okka part pick chesi cheppaali ante... Part-4 lo double standards gurinchi undi. It would be close to kushi bhumika "naa nadumu chusaav" scene About me | ||
Ysr2009 Side Hero Username: Ysr2009 Post Number: 3779 Registered: 03-2014 Posted From: 69.73.61.97 Rating: N/A |
hats off for your guts and motivation.. | ||
Analog Side Hero Username: Analog Post Number: 4242 Registered: 05-2008 Posted From: 97.99.104.4 Rating: N/A |
PK ki oka chapter dedicate chesi untaru kada..ye chapteroo chepthe first adi chadutha | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1029 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thank you
Lol About me | ||
Maverick Legend Username: Maverick Post Number: 59222 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 108.171.130.186 Rating: N/A |
good luck samraat Happy Vizag | ||
Airliner Side Hero Username: Airliner Post Number: 3181 Registered: 11-2011 Posted From: 24.140.229.181 Rating: N/A |
id ni suhagraat ani chadivi thread loki enter ayya tedaga vundentra babu ani  Great minds discuss ideas. Average minds discuss events. Small minds discuss people. | ||
Junior_no1 Hero Username: Junior_no1 Post Number: 10035 Registered: 09-2014 Posted From: 115.241.1.196 Rating: N/A |
awesome,terrific and good luck BABU BULL DOGS - ACHI BUCHI GALI DHOOOLI | ||
Nice Hero Username: Nice Post Number: 11346 Registered: 05-2009 Posted From: 115.112.100.10 Rating: N/A |
Hey enduku antha aavesam. Guidance is always advisable. Criticize chesthe aavesam ok gaani, guide chesthe kuda aavesam ante kastam | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1028 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks bro politics, history lo naakem idea ledu :P I'm almost illiterate. I'm more into tech stuff like this http://games-n-maths.in/About me | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8749 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8748 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: |
signing off for now, I thought constructive criticism will only help you and pointed out my thoughts....My intention was not to belittle you.. I already said how proud i felt about you.... I request you to not stamp my thoughts as a hater's opinion. Consider them as a well wisher's thoughts if you feel they are valid....after all, somebody jas to point out what they saw...right? Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Vjawarrior Megastar Username: Vjawarrior Post Number: 21637 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 71.228.237.119 Rating: N/A |
repu veddam...sarenaa....ooo feel aipomaaku....annanu ani...kurrod edo book raasadu....gramar lite teeskoni meaning /script meeda denkul edithe baaguntadani naa idi.... | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8747 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
ignoring this...seperate thread eyy...matladutha.... Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8745 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
both these statements look good when said seperately...the issue comes when they are clubbed...
this reordered statement is much much better...as there are no same "to's" on either side of a word ...this reordered statement is simpler, cleaner and conveys the same meaning... i pointed it out as these 5-6 lines written on amazon are your book's introduction to the world....Anybody would base their opinion on buying the book after reading these few lines....hence, wanted to point out what i noticed.. finally, good job brother...it takes lot of effort and perseverance to do what you did.. Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Vjawarrior Megastar Username: Vjawarrior Post Number: 21636 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 71.228.237.119 Rating: N/A |
saavadenkudu aapi...appreciate him and move on...deeenemma pratodu grammar seppe vaade....chusss.... Saughi....congrats and good luck... Cong scums meeda kooda oka book raayandi | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1027 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
I mean... "MY" profession About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1026 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
I'm not trying to defend anything here. But, I'm just sharing my understanding... Please correct me if I'm wrong. "I would like to" was used to describe my intended action "gift to my daughter" was used to mention the recipient of the gift. ////////////////// When the statement is re-ordered like this... "I would like to gift this book to my daughter" - I guess the two "to"s make sense. So, I'm convinced that the "to" is not redundant. About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1025 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks bro About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1024 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
you mean.. "say"?
Nope. I did not spend much time in editing. In the foreword section, I just asked the readers to replace the words with umbrella terms - if those umbrella terms make more sense in improving the gravity of a statement. And I also asked the readers to think about the impact if a statement is rearranged. Anyways... the idea was to communicate the thoughts. My linguistic skills are not that much impressive. I should work on them. But again, writing is just my hobby. It is not a profession. So... I'm just being lazyAbout me | ||
Saint Legend Username: Saint Post Number: 56749 Registered: 01-2011 Posted From: 98.156.0.52 Rating: N/A |
Good luck bro | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8744 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: |
like i said,,,very good attempt...i do not have the balls to attempt and finish what you did....period... but being an open forum, just wanted to day what i thought.. ///// This is the book I would like to gift to my daughter when she enters her teenage. ///// As you have already used the word "to" before the word gift, it is redundant in using it again right after.. ////////////////////////////// Also, check this..tell me your opinion on which is better: I want my future daughter to be aware of those differences. I want my future daughter to learn from the mistakes made by my close friend. (Or) I want my future daughter to be aware of those differences and learn from the mistakes made by my close friend. you see the difference....i am assuming editor removed some lines in between...may be better editing would have done wonders anukuntunna.. Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1023 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks a lot guys About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1022 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Oka rakangaa cheppaali ante... You are one of the main reasons... "book raayaali" anna naa oka vague thought ni dismiss cheyyakundaa... Nannu nenu konchem serious gaa teeskovadaaniki You deserve a special thanks About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1021 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thank you About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1020 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Nee noti chaluva valla idi nijam ayite... Neeku 10% dakshina samarpistaa About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1019 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Db rocks
My understanding is... "Gift something to someone" is thw right usage. I should verify it though. Thanks for the "intention" to correct me About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1018 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks bro
Hahahaha. Not at all. That is exactly what i mentioned in the "Disclaimers" section of the book About me | ||
Pulpfiction Legend Username: Pulpfiction Post Number: 39766 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 183.82.216.179 Rating: N/A |
love is eternal and love is the only truth .. good luck .. Jai Rayala Seema ! | ||
Xxx Side Hero Username: Xxx Post Number: 9999 Registered: 04-2009 Posted From: 149.168.132.16 Rating: N/A |
goodluck - | ||
Analog Side Hero Username: Analog Post Number: 4241 Registered: 05-2008 Posted From: 129.110.242.50 Rating: N/A |
Congrats thammi...will read it soon.. | ||
Maharshi Side Hero Username: Maharshi Post Number: 8099 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 73.29.105.219 Rating: N/A |
too good , all the best | ||
Thikka_sankara Megastar Username: Thikka_sankara Post Number: 24598 Registered: 02-2012 Posted From: 122.164.104.34 Rating: N/A |
All the best annai..... Perhaps nobody has changed the course of history as much as the historians. ~Franklin P. Jones" | ||
Nanigadu Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 16595 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 70.29.103.61 Rating: N/A |
Supero super Congrats Saughmraat annay | ||
Onlytruth Legend Username: Onlytruth Post Number: 175951 Registered: 01-2007 Posted From: 104.182.130.135 Rating: N/A |
good luck | ||
Asdf Hero Username: Asdf Post Number: 15223 Registered: 12-2014 Posted From: 76.109.165.236 Rating: N/A |
+1 if its easy to edit, check that annai | ||
Legend Username: Twitter Post Number: 41088 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 98.26.64.91 Rating: N/A |
good attempt samaram all the best. | ||
Whyme Hero Username: Whyme Post Number: 15416 Registered: 09-2009 Posted From: 107.14.49.1 Rating: N/A |
Nice.. Very nice.. Good job.. Congrats | ||
Emc2 Legend Username: Emc2 Post Number: 45571 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 74.92.133.21 Rating: N/A |
Wow , good luck DB rocks one more time, what an inspiration | ||
Sesani Legend Username: Sesani Post Number: 32874 Registered: 08-2014 Posted From: 69.114.184.164 Rating: N/A |
good luck! | ||
Seinfeld Megastar Username: Seinfeld Post Number: 26575 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 108.171.131.188 Rating: N/A |
thanks dude..i goke u, u goke me | ||
Gotcha Megastar Username: Gotcha Post Number: 22840 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 8.19.193.14 Rating: N/A |
kathi saami book click ayite u will be millionaire, best of luck. ... | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8740 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
This is the book I would like to gift to my daughter when she enters her teenage. //////////// This is the book I would like to gift my daughter when she enters her teenage. is the correct wording anukuntunna...check the usage of the word "to" timepass ki ayithe okay...but Professional ante please edit cheyinchandi editor tho Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Atta_boy Side Hero Username: Atta_boy Post Number: 8739 Registered: 02-2014 Posted From: 98.193.210.138 Rating: N/A |
Someone very close to me was in a lot of pain - because of love problems. I don't want my future daughter to face such problems and pain. I was wondering how can I prevent my future daughter from facing such pain. And then I realized that there is a lot of difference between the way how I was raised, and the way how my close friend was raised. I want my future daughter to be aware of those differences. I want my future daughter to learn from the mistakes made by my close friend. //////////////////////////////// uncle,,,ginni sarlu why using the future when referecing daughter... okka sari ki intention understood by audience....no need to repeat again and again....redundant anukuntunna.. btw...good attempt...need to read entire book though...amazon lo summary sadivithe anipinchindi...cheppan Time to slowly fade away.... | ||
Rajusk Legend Username: Rajusk Post Number: 42873 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 172.56.36.27 Rating: N/A |
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Masularex Side Hero Username: Masularex Post Number: 5974 Registered: 05-2010 Posted From: 175.101.68.85 Rating: N/A |
kudos and best of luck brother... that's why I love this db, remarkable individuals all in one place. | ||
Aggipidugu116 Junior Artist Username: Aggipidugu116 Post Number: 754 Registered: 07-2014 Posted From: 96.227.101.201 Rating: N/A |
Nice.. Love doctor va nvvu? Good luck.. | ||
Macbook Junior Artist Username: Macbook Post Number: 259 Registered: 12-2012 Posted From: 98.165.102.31 Rating: N/A |
Congrats and All the best | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1017 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks bro About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1016 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Thanks guys About me | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1015 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: N/A |
Hahahaha. Voddule bro. Praanteeya durabhimaanam, bandhu preeti range lo db co-member preeti kuda ostundi. Chadive opika vunte... Chadivi.. Nachite.. Review raayaali anipiste... Raase opika unte... Yaa... Please!!! Neeku telisina vaallaki edanna problem unnappudu ee book recommend cheste chaalu About me | ||
Sannayi_nokkulu Side Hero Username: Sannayi_nokkulu Post Number: 5308 Registered: 06-2014 Posted From: 68.100.234.172 Rating: N/A |
annai 5 stars vesi review rayala? amazon lo....bok sadavaka poina sare sachipotava , avineethi ga batukutava okkate option ante alochinchakunda chachipotaa ane type cbn - OT | ||
Toruk_makto Junior Artist Username: Toruk_makto Post Number: 237 Registered: 11-2011 Posted From: 178.152.88.196 Rating: N/A |
not a normal achievement man..kudos to your guts!! | ||
Seinfeld Megastar Username: Seinfeld Post Number: 26562 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 108.171.131.187 Rating: N/A |
awesome dude | ||
Asdf Hero Username: Asdf Post Number: 15220 Registered: 12-2014 Posted From: 76.109.165.236 Rating: N/A |
keka | ||
Saughmraat Comedian Username: Saughmraat Post Number: 1014 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 106.51.30.15 Rating: |
DB icchina encouragement to baagaa confidence ochesi.... Amma todu addangaa raasestaa ani oka book raasesaa. Book name: 143 thoughts about love problems Link: http://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/sitb/B018AVLGMG/ Please wish me goodluck guys About me |
