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     Arjun1234 Comedian Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 1894 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
in the end ... Night Shyamalan type lo... aaa abbayee manishi oka atma ani jhatka ivvaru kada... | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1235 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
too bad too worest .. physical ga etaina sesaara annai?  Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25423 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Vaammo...intha pedha story na......vopikaga chadivi chepthaa mama | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2489 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
motham point miss ayyav bro.....roja lo.....heroine gurinchi en telusani pelliki oppukuntadhu??? Sakhi lo...ammai gurinchi en telusani...train lo direct ga velli nuvvante ishtam ani cheptadhu... depiction of love at first sight is prolonged into scenes of extended duration gaani.....concept adhe | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1231 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
jai ..  Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Pavala Side Hero Username: Pavala Post Number: 8107 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 193.47.71.253 Rating: N/A |
der tamud and kamal tamud mani ratna kurrod movies lo comedy seap ga untaadhi typical sambhaar comedy...2bad2worst...media mafia sambhaar anesariki jai antaar...aallaki unna akula katta gouravam manaki ledhu...jai gaali anna.. 'EXCEL'LENT Beck is back ! | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1229 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
nooooooooo .. love at first sight enti annai .. Mani movies lo .. Geetanjali teesuko .. Nag and Girija .. tease chesukuntare kaani love ani eppudo .. movie madhya lo decide avutaru Roja .. Arvind Swamy/Madhoo .. love at first sight kadu .. Sakhi .. idi kooda anthe .. they take their own time to sort out their differences .. emo naaku aithe Mani is lot diff .. he does not make love stories sugary by adding scenes like .. hero saving heroine from an accident .. fee kattadam .. guddi vaallaki help chesi marks kottadam .. ilanti "unusual" scenes pettadu .. very natural scenes .. natural portrayal .. that is what makes it sweet anukuntunna .. anyways .. mee narration bagundi .. but naaku commercial love story laga anipinchindi .. which is probably .. in a way .. success Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2488 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
reservations adigava ledha annai...ventane quota okati create cheyyi...mana minority interests kosam | ||
| Pavala Side Hero Username: Pavala Post Number: 8102 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 193.47.71.253 Rating: N/A |
shashank tamud...admin kurrol naa manobhaavaal debba theesaar...kolukovadaniki time attindhi... 'EXCEL'LENT Beck is back ! | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2486 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
if u observe all the above stories start with love at first sight!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mani is a die hard romantic and that is his strength | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2485 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Nenu oka kala kane vadni....lol...seriously I think one can weave a poetic imagery ala Ran or seven samurai... every person has a non conventinalist in him. If not asalu ye cinema adadhu...we as a specie love fiction....this is a fictional love story....so view it that way...just like a star trek...its theme is fiction......fiction that completely is untouched by the human notions of conventionality | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2484 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
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| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1220 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
pavala hater uncle .. etayipoyaav? asalu kanipinchatledu .. busy with married life aa .. Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Pavala Side Hero Username: Pavala Post Number: 8098 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 193.47.71.253 Rating: N/A |
der tamud..nenu cph lo undan..anyway, denmark nachindha...sodhi lo boring ikkada..chass.. 'EXCEL'LENT Beck is back ! | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1214 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
btw .. mee narration skills chaala bagunnayi .. u r able to convey the feel in words .. given some experience .. I am sure, you will be able to portray that well on celluloid .. Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1213 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
annai .. nee lo oka karan johar unnadu (no offense meant) intha 'sweet/chocolate' love story aa .. naaku aa hero/protagonist ni idealize cheyyali anipistondi .. ventane burra lo .. pichoda .. ee lokam lo idealism pani cheyyadu ani anipistondi .. kurradu kinda foolish ani cheppadam naa uddesam .. old school .. whatever name u give it .. he is kinda away from the world .. and somehow I have this feeling that alanti vaallu .. ee love at first sight trash ni nammaru anukuntunna (conflict of characterisation emo !) btw .. naa personal opinion lo love at first sight leads to break-up at first fight anukuntunna and btw .. meeru aa iddaru individuals ni successful people ga choopinchali anukuntunnaru right? alantappudu .. show us how they faced problems in life (just a couple of them should be enough - not relating to their love life) .. what made him fall for this girl ? what is so special about this girl .. then you did well showing why the girl does fall for the guy at the first instance .. nor after 3 years ! so weave a story first .. then divide it into chunks .. then set them in different/convienient environments as you like while ensuring that the flow of the story does not take a beating .. not that I have any knowledge of film making .. but some love stories on reel are too unique .. Geetanjali, Roja, Sakhi .. (ofcourse all from the master Mani himself ) .. vaatillo .. under which circumstances the couple start their journey towards each other nunchi how they are able to keep their bond even after situations where every other couple would have parted .. that is what makes it sweet .. you do not have to exclusively add sugar like .. him looked at in rain after 3 years .. or greeting her in a busy NY subway by playing hired musicians .. this stuff to me is very sugary .. I did not/would not do that when I am in love .. just some suggestions ! Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2482 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
25 cents brother h r u 3 months back Nordea Bank ki vachanu brother Copenhagen..and then travelled to sweeden next day. | ||
| Pavala Side Hero Username: Pavala Post Number: 8095 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 193.47.71.253 Rating: N/A |
der tamud h r u...inkaa mega fans kurrol ni kukka d'lu eduthunnava 'EXCEL'LENT Beck is back ! | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 202 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 71.52.0.117 Rating: N/A |
in this particular case it seems like practicallity aint losing anything by accepting defeat to utopic true luv | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2481 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
bump for today | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2480 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
Scene12 was a flashback narrative just cuz I wanted to create a crescendo of the protoganist's attachement to this indv before actually setting forth the reason for it....logical contunuity lekunda undadhu defly narrative. I can vouch for that | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2479 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
Scene12: This is the disconnect that Cyclone garu might have referred to. Right after scene 8 when she tells him definitely that she doesnt converse with strangers that night. 3 days ago: The day after she tells him to back off,he can't resist his urge to see her. He gets down at her station and positions himself at a corner for just a glimpse...just a glimpse at that moment of his heart's tranquility. Right then she steps out with her friends and they walk over to the steps of the station and all of a sudden one of her friends calls out "Meera"...and his eyes search through those visages for a face...and there she turns...the angel of his life...."Meera"... Meera: "nenu padaleni paata peru neeva nenu geeyaleni bomma darpam neeva kanulu chudani chandruni challani kiranam neeva neeva ...meera" That is how he knows her name.....and then another friend proclaims that they will have a great party tommorow night for meera's birthday...and that is when he knows that day after is that angel's birthday. | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2478 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
Scene11: Thanaki podhuna ila birthday wishes cheppina vallu evaru...def ga oka abbai....thanu thana frnds circle lo evara anu aa ammai alochanalo padutunthe simultaneous ga hero thanu nene thanaki ichanani gurthu pattindemo ani alochanalo ..oka different world lo untdu...this scene establishes the sublime difference in both their philosophies. She can never think that some romantic might done this. He is quite the opposite. | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2477 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
Continuation from my post 2461... Scene10: Ala nov 5th thana preminchina aa ammaiki thana birthday roju cheppina aa variety wishes tarvatha thanu happiness, shock and inquisition to kalipina feeling ni dooram nunchi chusthunna hero kallalo maatalaku andani anandam. Thana character ni establish chese scene idhi. Thana pakkana unna friend...thanatho ane maata: " Nuvve akkada undi adantha ayyaka happy birthday chepthe nee effort ni recognise chesedhi kadha ra..." ante athanu iche reply is the key to the defnition of his character....the hero's reply: "Effort mukhyam kadhura.Anandam. Nenu Akkade unte thanu may be awkward ga feel ayyedemo.May be aa ackwardness thana santoshaniki addu vachedemo...appudu aa navvu chudalenu kadha ra....aa 3 mins of her happiness were both my effort and result" | ||
| Arjun1234 Comedian Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 1891 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
i m with u on this...
ne perception ki edo oka reason unadali kada types... but chill i dont want to break ur flow... plz continue | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2476 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
The reason why I am proceeding via scene by scene description is cuz one needs to capture this intensity in every frame of the story. The aim is to create a poetic depiction albiet through a day today portrayal... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2475 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
STORY OUTLINE: Oka true romantic and a very innocent guy who believes that when destiny shows him the chord of his heart he will find it. An extremely pragmatic woman who believes in total conventional wisdom. Both of them succesful to a fair degree. When fate pits them against each other, all the notions of the woman that she deemed untenable and impractical transpire before her eyes and with such intensity that she is shell shocked about how an anamoly to her perceived(in general prevelant) wisdom exists with out being distorted along the metrics of success. His very presence challenges her perception of the world. He falls for her in the first look and she believes that it is mere infatuation and actually pushes him away for expressing his love for her. Her intrepretation of people who fall in the first sight are turned upside down when she sees in this guy all the necessary traits of a normal succesful male yet untouched by her definitions of conventionality. But her ego is challenged and forces her to believe that 26 years of her perceived truth can't be false. She pushes him away. But then he believes that he was made for her, Believes in the purity of his love for her and wants to give her everything that she wants..even that freedom from his presence. His belief is in his morality. | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2474 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
aa voids ne cheppi ela fill chesthe bavuntundho chepthe...helpful... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2473 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
Anukuntunna. Nenu konni short films teesanu but mostly psychological warfare of dual identities etc...romantic cinemaki life feel anukuntunna...with honesty. I am not even eligible to say whether it is a plausible subject for a movie per se. But I was interested in developing a script and its fidelity to its premise | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2472 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
ardham kaledhu...setting kadhu...may be emotional feeling oka personal level lo associate avvagaligithene kadhaga rayagalam emo...but the story itself is a clash between pragmatism and utopia. its pure purpose is to weave some sort of a narrative embedded with a poetic reflection of what it means to merge ones identity into another soul. This is definitely my perception of true love. As I said, logics apart this is purely an illustrative effort to portray a very different emotion. | ||
| Arjun1234 Comedian Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 1890 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
bro... did this happen to u?... its very relatable to one self anukuntunna | ||
| Kint Junior Artist Username: Kint Post Number: 82 Registered: 07-2009 Posted From: 205.214.231.148 Rating: N/A |
Excellent narration bro... chaduvuthunte chala bagundi but movie ga teesthe intha depth kanapaduthunda? | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14703 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
Ni posts anni sadiva... narration chaala baagundi brother... scene wise chaduvuthe saana baagundi.... scenes continuity lo konchem clarity ledhu ani anukuntunna (even if someone were to fill in the gaps). Anyways inni scenes raasina vaadivi.... story mottam nuvvu raasthene nyayam jarugutundi ani anukuntunna. From the details you have provided... endhuko konni scenes as is ga ni personal life vi raasavu emo ani anukuntunna.  You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi  | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2471 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
lock this | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14702 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: |
Just finished my office calls... saana late ayiponaadi... will try to read all in detail and let you know my opinion. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Maverick Hero Username: Maverick Post Number: 10853 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 24.1.171.91 Rating: N/A |
first 3 scenes chadiva..a good start..is it just truly romantic or u want to end up showing the female lead in a bad way? 10k post : why do u want to do pmp? | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2470 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
annagaru asalu chadivara ledha??? | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2469 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
did u read the script...inputs please? | ||
| Maverick Hero Username: Maverick Post Number: 10851 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 24.1.171.91 Rating: N/A |
is it for me? 10k post : why do u want to do pmp? | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1201 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 98.212.183.18 Rating: N/A |
he is around j/k Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2468 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
ela clarity please | ||
| Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 7080 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.19.86.81 Rating: N/A |
Ayana englishe kaadu telugu kooda ardam kadu sumee {ayana patale kadu matalu kooda ardhm kavu neekemanna ardham ayyinda tayaroo typelo chadooko }Ekkado munigi ikkada tela | ||
| Maverick Hero Username: Maverick Post Number: 10849 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 24.1.171.91 Rating: N/A |
 10k post : why do u want to do pmp? | ||
| Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 7079 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.19.86.81 Rating: N/A |
kamal tammudu abhiprayamtho ekeebhavinchalo oddo teleeka Ekkado munigi ikkada tela | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2467 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 68.46.187.214 Rating: N/A |
aa looks ki meaning...kiki...nachakapothe OK | ||
| Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 7077 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.19.86.81 Rating: N/A |
 Ekkado munigi ikkada tela | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1198 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 98.212.183.18 Rating: N/A |
annai .. baaga raasaru .. kaani please story laga cheppandi annai .. I do not know if it is my problem .. but scenes, background, etc etc gurinchi alochisthe .. continuity ledu .. but in essence .. story bagundi .. frankly .. story raasi .. screenplay develop cheyyandi .. meeku kooda confusion undadu anukuntunna .. ante meeku ippudu undi ani kaadu .. Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Takeitez Side Hero Username: Takeitez Post Number: 2520 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 70.84.106.146 Rating: N/A |
tammul, tfi copy masters ccdb meeda oka kannu eyyalsina time vachhinda? TakeitEZ! | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2462 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
The songs essence shud be the description of the boy of his beau's smile....comparing it to the few fresh flowers emerging out of white snow....bavarian alps might be the best setting...also iceland's gullfoss waterfalls... For the song expecting junta....lol | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2461 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Contnuation to scene8 and my post 2457: "Ala ascharyam lo munigina aa ammayi...chuttura chusi...oka chinna confusion, surprise and navvutho janalalo kalisi velthu untundhi......." Camera lift chesi top angle......atelast 4 floors high.......pakkaki tippithe 2 blocks dooram lo...earth greem T lo....hero.....akasam vanka chusi kayiga navvutadhu....aa nimisham.....athaniki thana pakkana undali anipinchala...just thana mohamlo aa navvu chudali anipinchindhi...chusadu...........venakki tirigi...konchem exuburent ga nadusthu vellipotuntadhu...janalatho..... Now we merge the background of people in white....only his Tee and hair maintain their color....and he just walks into the crowd...so does she.....Sky blue hood..and the ambience around her turns to white....and they start moving from a point in two angular directions.....on a snow land....song...... | ||
| Cocanada Hero Username: Cocanada Post Number: 12567 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 136.181.195.4 Rating: N/A |
still at work. Can not concentrate now  Try try try .... you will succeed | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2460 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
inputs from u??? | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 201 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.141.197 Rating: N/A |
narration is simply awesome..........e materialistic world lo selfless ga love cheyatamu chaala kastamu ..........protoganist aint expecting anything in return from his lover e concept chala nachindhi naku | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2459 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
paatalu pranam ee cinemaki | ||
| Cocanada Hero Username: Cocanada Post Number: 12566 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 136.181.195.4 Rating: N/A |
BG lo narration "Remember remember the fifth of November" Try try try .... you will succeed | ||
| Lionswalkalone Side Hero Username: Lionswalkalone Post Number: 5937 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 204.124.181.143 Rating: N/A |
 ..Kindal enti?...House teesi needi songs leni cinema naa enti.. | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2458 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
kindal???...n e how narration bavundaka pothe kshaminchandi...nenu visualize chesindhi cheppanu | ||
| Lionswalkalone Side Hero Username: Lionswalkalone Post Number: 5936 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 204.124.181.143 Rating: |
Ikkada cut chesi, location maarchi Grand Canyon lo oka song... Behka mei behka, woh behki hawa si aai... Ek hi nazar mei sab manzil wanzil paaye... Hatke alag si thi, bilkul juda sii Na hi adaayein, na koi angdaii.... hindu song ayite eriety ga vuntadi... but driverramudu kaka oppukokapothe telugu lo ayina ettukovachu ... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2457 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
ani oka gonthu cheppina 3 lines....aa moment...aa ammaiki ela react avvalo teliyani...oka chinna ibandhi...ahladham.....ascharyam kalisina chinna expression...Thanaki birthday ani cheppina aa vyakthi kosam athram chusthunna kallu....evaru tarasa padaru.....she approaches the musicians....and they say a guy paid them to play before her...and when she stepped out asked them to play ... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2456 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Scene9: November 5th, Times Square.......Union station bayataki rangane...Borders deggara kallu pettina aa ammai sudden ga thala ethi chusindhi....green top, grey overcoat tho unna skirt lo unna thana mundhu......Opera type lo 6 musicians extempore overture......crescendo...and all of a sudden the violins stop and suddenly from the background....on the billboard screens: " Akasanni palakala marchi rayalanukunna oka chinna gunde aratam nakshathralani..puluga guchi ivvaleni oka thana nissahayta cheppeleni vainam nuvvu puttavu ani telisi pattaleni aanandam....kalipi chepthunna: Happy birthday...meera" | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2455 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Scene 8: Mali ratri 8PM....heroine malli fast ga thanan train teeskundhi....ratri 10PM...thana station deggara...digutundhi....steps teeskuntundaga...venaka nunchi oka arupu.....paregetuthu aa kurradu...thanani approach avuthu....aa ammai manasulo oka uncomfortable feeling...aa kurradu aagi...." podhunna adugudham anukunna Question indake gurthochindhi anduke....vachanu...." Thanu quizzical ga chustunte....: " mee peru enta ani adugudham anukunnanu...but podhunna meeru velle speed ki answer cheppe teerika ledhani telusukunannu...aduke...meeku teeriki kosam intha varaku wait chesanu antadu" aame..."srry. strangers tho nenu matladanu...and I am not into giving my name to unkown people....antundhi" venaki tirigi vellipothu chinnaga...kopam...surprise kalipina oka chinna choopu...visiri veltundhi....... Thanu paiki vellipoyaka....athanu melliga" "Good night" anu gaali mathram vinipichetattu cheppi....thanalo thanu navvukuni......vastunna rail vaipu chusthadhu.... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2454 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Nenu kindal cheyyaledhu eppudu evarni...direct ga chepthanu naa displeasure ni | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2453 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Scene 7 establishes the nature of the Guy...His emotion has just one trait...innocence.....oka abbai thana mansuki nachina oka roopanni chusina modati nimisham pondhe...anandam...danilo....aame thanatho matladina maatala ardham alochinche vichakshana ledhu....aa rendu nimishalu aame noti nunchi vachina aa sabdham thana lokam....aa sabdhamlone thana aasa..... | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3919 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 98.221.83.14 Rating: N/A |
Der, first post ippude chadivaa. Mee narration ki naa imagination add chesthe ammayi naa kalla mundu clear gaa kanapadindi :-) anta baavundi. Let me read the rest .... Btw, maa andarini kindaling cheyadaniki ayithe kaadu Kadaa :-) If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2452 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Scene7: Thanu aagutundhi...aa abbai vanka chusi....listen...I appreciate ur questions...but vatiki answers naa deggara ivvataniki time ledhu ani janalalo kalisipothundhi........thanu mundhuki nadustunte....venakki tirigi.....velle janalalo thanu...kalisi velthunnadhu....slow motion.... jarigina aa okka 2 nimishallo...jeevitham lo teliyani...oka pulakintha...modati jallu padina tarunam nela talli chese ananda geetham la...aa jallu chiru jalludha..leka pralayanidha teliyani amayakatvam lo...aa yuvakuni manasu chendhe modati...anubhuthi.....venakki tirigi chusthadhu...thanu chudadhu....vellipothu untundhi....kaani athani kallalo...oka chiru navvu.......varsham kurisina tarvatha akasana velasina suryudi kanthulu....chindhinche merupu vale..... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2451 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
Scene6: Subway lonunchi gabalna digina aa ammai....veganga veltunte..venaka nunchi sudden ga Hi ane gonthu...tirigi chusindhi....kaithan andinchina abbai...Hi andhi...kangaru...excitement kalagalipina...moham tho...NY vachara ani adigi..aame samdhanam kallalo chusi...naluka karuchukuni...work ki velthunnara ani aduguthadhu...yes...ani vellipotondhi..... Velthunna thanatho inko okka nimisham matladali ane aratam....okka nimisham kaalam venakki velli..Aa hi deggara...kaalam aagipothe bavundu ane....oka pichi aratam....thana venakke parugu theesi...." chinnappati nunchi Question adagatam raaka...ila tension lo answer leni questions adugutam alavatu ayyindhi antadhu...thanu vesina chinna stupid statement kaina thanu navvutundhemo ani...." A question aduguthunnappudu...venakala....background lo thanu cinemalo chusina oka scene.... Hero ila pichi prasna vesthe...heroine navvutundhi....cinemaki jeevithaniki madhyana chinna sandhulo payanisthunna oka yuvakuni modathi gunde chappudu...aa kshanam........ | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14701 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
Read partially.... chaala baaga rasthunnavu brother... you can pool in your content/stories to our thread. I'm stepping out now... will discuss this later in the night. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2448 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
first mee understanding of the plot cheppandi...as in not ur personal feeling abt existence of such characters...plainly IF WE ARE PLANNING TO MAKE A POETIC DEPICTION OF TRUE LOVE, DO U BELEIVE THAT THESE CHARACTERS WILL HOLD THE THEME FIRMLY?? After u guys answer this Q, we can talk later | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2447 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
and then we should establish the guy: 1.) Successful and bright 2.) believes that when he comes across that special one, his heart will tell him 3.) believes in purity of emotion as opposed to practicality and believes that His God had that moment written for him In all senses, we are pitting 2 characters who are successful yet believe that life is of 2 different forms... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2446 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Madhyalo misclaalenous incidents with heroine and her friends etc to set the mood of her life....to encpasulate the following: 1.) A very independent woman. A practical go getter 2.) strongly believes that utopic absolutes don't exist. 3.) Believes that she will know a guy for atleast 3-4 years before going with him. ( I am not challenging conventional wisdom. I am trying to paint a poetic portrayal of true love and a depiction of it per the author's vision and what happens when something that we believe can't be true or too good to be true happens..in a way that doesn't involve a return anedhi naa premise. Remember the protagonist is not a drunkard nor a gloomy giveaway. He is a successful indv but with a rather super natural belief in his love...as simple as that) | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 197 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.141.197 Rating: |
adi edo englishu loney cheyandi ma daggaraa dictionary undhi ga | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2445 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
characters ni establish chesthanu...vallu add chestharu | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 195 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.141.197 Rating: |
tread titile lo anthamandhini pilichavu motham secenes anni meerey type chesthey enka vallau ochi emi cheyalli ...... | ||
| Mario_puzo Comedian Username: Mario_puzo Post Number: 1779 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 122.175.68.226 Rating: |
der tammud....ba rastunnav, carry on.... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2444 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Scene5: Malli subway train in NY....oka seatlo kurchuni unna aa ammai paatalu vintu...dooranga ......janala madhyalo......pusthakam chaduvuthu....monna tarasa padina abbai.....quizzical ga thana vanka chusindhi....chusi thana pani thanu chuskutondhi.....10 mins tarvatha thala ethi adhe direction lo chusthe....athanu thana vanka chusthunnadu....sudden ga navvuthu thala nod chesadu.....thanu...avoid chesindhi....... | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2443 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Utopic feeling non existent ani namme oka character....nijanga utopia ki deggaralo oka character ni chusthe.....adhi chusina roju thana manasulo kalige alochanalu ela untayi.....idhi kadhaki moolam..... oka manishi inthaga evarni preminchaledu ani cheppataniki...mana telugu cinemalo use chese vidhanam...heroine kosam....fees kattadam....etc etc...but thanu adigina freedom ni (thani nunchi duranni) kooda thanaku ichi...still thana gurthuni kooda preminche oka manishi tharasa padithe...thanu undadhu ani namme nijanni thanu gamanisthe...oka ammai mansulo rege....oka inner struggle...ee story underlying premise | ||
| Takeitez Side Hero Username: Takeitez Post Number: 2519 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 70.84.106.146 Rating: |
correct ga cheppav tammud, ye thread matter aa thread lo marchopovali TakeitEZ! | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2442 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Storu outline: Just like majnu...but we cast it differently....premalo nijayithi undadhu ane vaadana...chaala cases lo true...but what if a guy somehow connects with another soul so deeply that his very existence is interwoven with her thought....thanu vidiche prathi swasalonu....amenu maravaleni oka avedhana....aa smruthiki kaalam, place yevi kolamaanalu kaadhu.... alanti oka feeling undadhu ani namme oka ammayi...sudden ga 3 years tarvatha thanu lekapoina thana smruthini kooda preminche oka manishini chusthe....(the guy doesnt see her.)....aa ammai manasulo rege alochanala yudham meedha kadha.... The heart of the story are the last lines he tells her: "ye rojukaina naa prema lothu neeku telustundhi...aa rojuna..prasnardhakamaina aa devudu kooda...neeku naa gurthuni testhadhu.....aa roju kosam nenu eduru chusthanu" | ||
| Lionswalkalone Side Hero Username: Lionswalkalone Post Number: 5933 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 204.124.181.143 Rating: |
new york nagaram back ground pedite any story super hit annattu...andulonu Times square...baagu baagu...bahu baagu intavaraku bagane vundi.. single stars enduku guddaaru? content choosi stars guddandi ra babu...post chesina ID choosi, manaki ishtam leni ID aite guddatam kaadu...  | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2441 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
single stars apendi babulu..personal vendetta tarvatha.....I wanted to seek their input...simple | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2440 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
Out and out corny romantic movie...so logic teekshananga vethakadhu...... Scene4: NewYork mahanagram, times square.......subway lonchi velluvala vasthunna janavahini..adhi rush hour.....heroine....fast ga ..thana bag teeskuni road meedhaki...parugedutondhi.....venaka nunchi oka gonthu : Excuse me.....mee kaitham ani telugulo oka gonthu...ascharyam....thanu telugu ani ela teluso ani oka Q... kaitham meedha arudra rasina oka kavitha.....danni chupisthu...a kurradu....mooga manasulu cinemlodhi paata...kaani mee vothule konchem tappuga unnai.....english medium I guess annadu.....thana page teeskuni......aame oka thanks cheppi vellipoindhi | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2439 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: |
naaku mee antha narration raakapovachu...but since you are good at narrating a story, I want to lay out a theme and some initial scenes so that you ppl can carry it. Scene1: Joruna paduthunna vaana jallu..darker and gloomy frame (just like alalai pongenu naa kannulu paata in sakhi). Oka kikkirisina mall deggara janalu vaana nunchi teripi kosam nunchini unnaru. Kanipinchi kanipinchani oka andagatte kaali muvvalu..chethilo files.....nemmedhiga..sardukuntunna aame chempa pai nunchi kurulu....joruna gaali.....aame chethiloni pages egiri...galiki egiri oka nela meedha paddayi...okko page teeskuntu parugulu peduthunna aa ammai....thana kayithalu teeskuni...chivari page chusthe aame roopanni andanga pencil tho geesi undhi....teliyani ascharyam....digbranthi....chottora chustunte.....road ki avali vaipu.....eguruthunna kaithalu....kanipinchi kanipinchani...oka abbai roopam...sudden ga...oka urumu...and then aa neeti jallulo thanu chustundhi..athanni....thanu 3 years kindatha thanu chi kottina oka abhimani.... scene2: sepia background lo...tirigi vellipothunna thana chevullo aa kurradu anna maatalu: "ye rojukaina naa prema lothu neeku telustundhi...aa rojuna..prasnardhakamaina aa devuda...neeku naa gurthuni testhadhu.....aa roju kosam nenu eduru chusthanu"..... frame kindha 3 years back United States Of America, New York nagaram Scene3: Intiki vellina thanu, annam tintondhi...kaani thana dhyasa daani meedha ledhu....."thanu anna aa chivari maatalu gundello ghoshala pratidvanisthunnayi..prapanchaniki avthala unna oka manishi.....after 3years India lo bus stop lo en chesthunnadhu.....thana chethilo thana bomma enduku undhi...... |
