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     Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14738 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
STORY: ATHADU AAME PRIYUDU Adi Saturday Usual ga Saturday ante endhuko special ga feel avuthanu may be I was born on Saturday. Early morning legavadam Suprabhatham play chesthu oka cup coffee tho news paper chadavadam... then breakfast chesthu TV lo vacche patha songs kosam channels anni vethakadam oka routine ayipoyindi. Prathi Saturday la ga ne ee roju kooda start ayyindi but manasu antha ninna jarigina incident chuttu ne thiruguthunnadi. Endhuko 'Sarayu' baaga gurthuku vasthundi...... Mr. Hyderabad version:2 Sarayu aloochanala tho vere lokam lo munigi vunna nenu, "yeraa inko dosa veyyamantaavaa?" anna amma pilupu tho vuliki padi ee lokam lo ki vachanu. Plate lo vunna dosalu inkaa alaage vunnayi. Plate pakkane table meeda vunna letters choodagaane navvu vachindi. Eppudu raasaano kuda teliyadu kaani table meeda chutney tho SARAYU ani raasa Samayochitam gaa tv lo "ee vela lo neevu em chesthu vuntaavu" paata raavadam modalayyindi. Intaki Sarayu evaro cheppa ne ledu kadu... Naaku tanu parichayam ayyi konnalle ayinaa, yuga yugaalu gaa pravahisthunna sarayu nadi laa janma janma la bandham laa anipistundi Maa iddari parichayam chaala gammathu gaa jarigindi konta kaalam kritam. Aa roju vipareetamaina varsham early morning nundi. Nenu nemmadigaa car drive chesthu veltunna office ki. Footpath meeda umbrella pattukoni slow ga nadusthu veltundi oka ammayi. Anta pedda varsham lo anta chinna umbrella emi help avadam ledu anukuntaa.. tanu almost tadichi poyindi. Slow gaa tana pakkana car aapi window role chesi adigaa "Hello, lift kaavala andi?" Oka nimusham nannu, naa car ni, chuttu parisaraalu ani choosi "Sure" ani car ekkindi. "Inta pedda varsham lo ekkadiki veltunnaru?" "Job interview vundi andi ikkada daggarlo. Ee road runing varaku auto lo vachaka akkada water lo auto engine fail ayindi. Vere auto dorakaledu. Time avutundi ani nadichi vasthunna. Thanks for your help" "Ponee interview re-schedule cheyamani adagaka poyaaraa?" "Aa manager chaala old school type ani maa friend cheppindi andi. She works there. Interview kosam aa maatram kashtapadi raaleraa ani anna antaadu ani cheppindi. Manishi ki 30 years kuda levu kaani thoughts maatram baamma kaalam thoughts ani cheppindi" "Mari inni telisi atani daggara job ki enduku veltunnaru?" "Em chestham cheppandi. Company chaala manchidi. Leka leka interview call vachindi ression time lo. Konchem exp vasthe tarvata jump cheyochu" "Inkaa ee job raaledu appude next job gurinchi plan chesthunnare?" "Ippudu meeru kuda aa manager type lo maatladutunnaru" "sarle andi. intaki ye company lo interview?" "Gayatri Finance" Aprayatnamgaa naa kaalu break meeda ki vellindi. Already wet road kaavadam tho car skid ayyi curb ki velli dhee kottindi. Tarvata interview room lo emi jarigi vuntundo meeru oohinchagalaru. alaa modalaina maa parichayam 6 moths lo chaala munduki vellindi. Maa iddari abhiprayalu, alochanalu complete opposite ayinappatiki kuda manchi friends ayyam. May be that's why people say "opposite poles attract" Ee rojo, repo maa relation ni friendship stage nundi next stage ki teesuku velle question tana mundu vunchudaam anukune time lo, anukokundaa ninna oka sanghatana jarigindi. Ninna night intiki vachaka sarigaa nidra pattaledu. SARAYU baaga gurthu ku vasthondi ee roju Razesh's conclusion:3 Sarayu baaga gurthosthondhi ee roju.... ee maata padhe padhe anukovatam gurthu ravatam kante ibbandhi peduthondhi... Ninna Sarayu intiki phone chesi thana kosam adigithe "Kick" cinemaki vellindhi ani cheppaaru....release ayina 100 rojula tarvatha vellatam ento artham kaaledhu......naaku vellalanipinchindhi...kaadhu kaadhu...thanani akkada choodalanipinchindhi.... Theatre daggaraki ragaane naaku telusthondhi...aame ee chuttu pakkale vundhi ani.....adhento Sarayu tho premalo paddappati nunchi prathi aadapilla aame laane kanipisthondhi.....Sarayu yemo ani choodatam, ammayilani eppudu choodaledhaa annattu vaallu choodatam...neninkedho choodatam .... Thanani vethukuthoone theatre lo adugu pettaanu.... "Prapancham maa idharini vadhili vaallu mathram tera venakki vellipoyinattu" theatre antha kaaliga vundhi. 100 rojula tarvatha theatre kaaliga vundatam lo aascharyam emundhi.....vethukuthoo cheekatlo oka moolana koorchunnanu.....aame kosam naa kallu vethikaayi, sareeraaniki mathram siggu addosthondhi.... oka moolaga oka janta kanapadindi.... Sarayu kuda naa pakkane alaa koorchunte.....anipinchindhi...navvochindhi....ventane mayamaindhi.... Evarakkada....aa Janta lo koorchunnadhi Sarayu yenaa.....avvakoodadu bhagavanthudaa anipinchindhi....Evaro kalla paina mainum posinattugaa..naa kallu masaka baaruthunnaayi.....naalugellu parichayamaina mohamainaa....enduko aame ni gurthu pattalekapothunnanu....aame ani telusthoo vundhi....pakkane andhagaadaina inko magavaadi bhujam paina thala petti...chethilo cheyyi vesi....koorchundhi aame....nischayamgaa aame .... Manasu edchinattu vundhi...Kanti varaku ravataniki aham addochi Gonthu daggare aagi ibbandhi peduthondhi.... Vayasochina aada pilla ni corner seat lo koochobetti cheyyi nimire annayya vunduntaadaaa Theatre kaaliga vuntundhi kabatti samajam mana snehaaniki musugu veyyadhani cinema ki teesukochina snehithudu ayyuntaadaa..... Kasi teeraa edavalanipinchindhi naaku.......Theatre lonchi vellipovalanipinchindhi.....lechaanu.....aame nannu choosindhi....athani cheyyi vadhilesindhi....bhujam paina thala teesindhi....navvaleka navvindhi...okappudu navvinappudu aame navvu ni mathrame choosevaadini....ippudu engili padda pedhaalu ni choosi naaku navvalanipinchindhi.... Theatre lonchi bayatakochesaanu......araganta mundhu dhoodhi pinjelaa thaakina gaali...ippudu koradaa tho thaakuthunnattu ga anipisthondhi.... Bike start chesi bayatakochaanu...prathi aadadhanilo Sarayu kanipinche naaku...vichithramga ippudu prathi magavaadilo ATHADU kanipisthunnaadu.... Aaru nelala parichayaaniki intha badha paduthondhi manasu ani anukovataaniki ledhu.... aame ni naalugella kindhata idhe roju choosaanu.....Naa kosame puttindhanipinchindhi..... adhe Bus stop lo ee naalugellalo nalugu rojulu mathrame aamenu Miss ayyaanu... Naalugu rojulu kachithamga gurthupettukunnaanu ante cheppochu naa prema entha ghaadamaindho.... Aame gurthuku raani kshanam ledhu.....ee naalugellalo..... Thana parichayam kosam veyyani ethu ledhu..... Aa varsham mammalni kalipindhi.... Rathri naaku nidra pattaledhu.... Chutney tho aame peru raasaanu....entha andhamaina peru.....naadhi kaani peru... Tiffin thina budhi kaaledhu....cheyyi kadigesi Balcony loki vellaanu.....Aalochinchaalani.... em cheyyaali ippudu.....thanani elaa ayina naadhanni chesukovachu...thana kutumba paristhithi naakku telusu ..... 4 yella nunchi aame chuttu thiruguthunnaanu ante nenu preminchindhi aame vyaktithvaanni kaadu, aame andhaanni.....mari aame character elaantidhi ayithe naakenduku..... alaa ani aame manasulo inkokaru vunnappudu nannu pellaadi marchipogaladhaa....kachithamga marchipovachu....entha mandhi sthree purushulu kapuram cheyyatam ledhu.... Prema lo priyudokkade kanipisthaadu....Pelli tarvatha masina battalu, edhuguthunna pillalu andharu kanipisthaaru..... Kindha calling Bell mogindhi.....aame ayyundochu....Senivaaram bellu kotti lepe sahasam aame kaaka inkevaru chesthaaru.... thalupu teesaanu.....aame...navvindhi.....pedhaalu choodaledhu...Kallu choosaanu...aparaadha bhavam kanipisthondhi "Ninna theatre lo palakarinchaledhemi" "ante cinema kochi dhenikochaaru ani adagatam baagodhani..." "inkedhaina matladochugaa" "Inkedho matladatam naaku chetha kaadhu Sarayu....akkada matladalanipinchaledhu..vachesaanu" "Endukani...." "Neeku samadhanam telisina prasnalaki nenu thirigi cheppukovatam dwaara neeku aanandam kaliginche panaithe malli Chepthaanu.... I love you...Nenu ninnu premisthunnanu.....nenu korukunna ammayi inkokari vodilo thala pettukoni padukoni vunte..... Cool drinks pattukochentha challati manasu naaku ledhu" "...." "...Athani peru Sagar, rendu nelala nunchi parichayam....." "Pelli chesukundhamanukuntunnaraa...." "Ledhu....athaniki vere ammayitho nischithardham ayindhi....Chivariga veedkolu palakataaniki mathrame ninna kalisaanu....." "Naaku ee vishayam enduku cheppaledhu....nenu ninnu premisthunnaanani teleedhaa" "Telusu...kaani ....." "athanu lenappudu inka problem emundhi......nenu ninnu kshamisthaanu ante nannu pelli chesukuntaavaaa...." "antee......mee intlo abhyantharam lekapotheee" "hahaha......Entha amayakudini sarayu nenu... Pelli chesukodu ani telisi kuda bhujam pai vaali chethilo cheyyi vesi nimirentha goppa manasu naaku ledhu.....Inkoka sthree ki chendhabothunnadani telisi kuda vontariga kalavataniki ishtapadda nee antha thegimpu naaku ledhu....Nenu magaadini...andhari lanti magaadini.... Ee aaru nelala parichayam lo nee prema gurinchi cheppaledhu.....ippudu kuda theatre lo choosaanu kabatti cheppaavu...lekapothe manam aanandamga pelli chesukoni vundevaallam.....Mana biddaki SAGAR ane peru petti nuvvu mudhaadithe....Thalli prema ani nenu murisipoyevaadini.....vaadilo priyudini choosukoni nuvvu murisipoyedhaanivi.... Nuvvu naaku vadhu Sarayu....Nannu nenu premisthaanu.....Ninnu kuda premisthunnaanu...... Reppodhuna pelli ayyaaka viraha thaapam lo nuvvu kallu moosukoni mooliginappudu nannenaa SAGAR gurthochaadaaa ani naa manasulo aalochana vachinappudu jeevitham narakam la anipisthundhi.... Kabatti... Nannu pelli chesukovatam naakante neeke ekkuva pramadhakaram" "inthenaa......nannu vellipommantaavaaa" "kachithamgaa vellipo Sarayu.... Veelaithe Nee sagar ni saadhinchuko....lekapothe marichipoyi ninnu artham chesukone bhartha ni sampadhinchuko.....Vollo edchi, juttu nimire prema kaakunda....pelli mathrame parakaashta ga preminchu.....Maro Sagar dorukuthaadu.......Ninnu preminchataaniki naalugellu pattindhi.....marichipovataaniki maro naalugellu pattochu....Kaalam a gayaanni ayina maanputhundhi" Kanneeru vachindhi idhariki......nanne choosthoo venakki thirigindhi...Door varaku velli thirigi choosindhi..... Thanani thirigi pilichi naalo kalupukuntaanani.....No way.... Ganga ayina, kaveri ayina, Sarayu ayinaa....Kalavaalsindhi SAGARam lone.........maro nadhilo kaadhu.... Inthaki naa peru cheppaledhu kadhu....Yamuna, Ganga, Godavari lanti Andhamaina aadavaari perlunnaa....Naalaa ekaakiga migilina oke okka maga nadhi pere naa Peru... "KRISHNA, KRISHNA na peru" Aame thalupu moosesindhi.....Vellipoye vuntundhi....Naa jeevitham lonchi kudaa You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi  | ||
| Thelegend Moderator Username: Thelegend Post Number: 2531 Registered: 04-2008 Rating: N/A |
scroll cheskune pani lekunda story mottham okka post lo copy paste cheyyandi, chadvukuntam... diiferent authors vi diff color lo eyyandi | ||
| Bujji_pandu Junior Artist Username: Bujji_pandu Post Number: 1 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 20.137.18.53 Rating: N/A |
Supre Razesh...excellent.. | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14720 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
 You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25441 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
anni memu sethe meeren sethaaru....Sarayu tho sarasaalu aadathaaraa...aadinchaalsina badhyatha meedhe... | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3922 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Special guest gaa Priayamani ni mee influence use chesi invite cheyyandi  If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14719 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
Chief guests ga maa Mohan Babu 'garu'... maa lucky mascot veroine Priyamani ni kooda pilusthunna. Moginchandi 'Vijayabheri'!  You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25435 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Ippatikaina minchi poyindhi ledhu.... Jr.NTR chaitanya radham kaaliga vundhi....adhesukoni vijaya yatra ki podhaamu | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14718 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
Vijayotsava sabha ki invite seseyandi mari... hero/heroine bus ekkinchi thippeddari. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14717 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 72.79.124.3 Rating: N/A |
 You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25433 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
 Rao gaari valla cinema kill avuthondhi.... modhati roju Super Hit talk vachi kuda rendo rojuki Deficit padindhante producer lopame | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3921 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
annai, producer ki nachaka poyina public ki baaga ekkesindi cinema. Super Hit anukuntaa Rao Gaaru, mana cinema elaa vunna, 2nd day "success meet"... 2nd week nundi "vijaya yatra" etc set cheyyali meeru... adi mana tradition. Janam mechina cinema ni producer kill chesina first instance ide emo  If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1200 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 98.212.183.18 Rating: N/A |
annai .. nenu aayana vaadina aanglam ke baadhapadda kadha chadiveppudu ! inka ekkuva kaavala?  Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Kalki Junior Artist Username: Kalki Post Number: 120 Registered: 11-2008 Posted From: 68.36.217.121 Rating: N/A |
Razesh your narration skills simply superb you need to add a style to this flow. Trivikram came with twisted punch dialogues and created a different trend prior to him paruchuri brothers had their own way aggressive punches for a decade I believe . If I analyse furthur Dasari in his time got his own . But most of these trends reflected youth desire towards story narration so try to mix english to poetic telugu in your punches , wish you a best writer career ahead and all the best. | ||
| Junior Artist Username: Twitter Post Number: 40 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 69.116.120.28 Rating: N/A |
story paathadhana nee presentation super, tragedy lo humor try chesthunnav man 3vik maatallaga, any how good job keep it up.  eppudoccham annadhi kaadhannaya bullet dhigindha ledha anedhe mukyam... | ||
| Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 7069 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.19.86.81 Rating: |
nee enks posani ni gurtuteppinchav mental "krishnaa "  Ekkado munigi ikkada tela | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1175 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 98.212.183.18 Rating: N/A |
office lo kontha chadiva bro .. scenes laga enduku raastunnaru? but naaku first scene nachindi .. alage second scene nachindi .. kaani connectivity kanipinchaledu .. veelaithe .. first oka story compose cheyyandi .. screen play taravata add cheddam antha ga kavalante ! Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 2464 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 198.135.110.2 Rating: N/A |
yo read my script oka sari..kiki | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1172 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 98.212.183.18 Rating: N/A |
Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 194 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.141.197 Rating: N/A |
very nice write up frm both Mr Hyd and Rajesh .......meeru story raasaka Rao garu sketch icchinattuga keka puttincharu............take off and second part were excellent ...charecterisation of herione was week anipinchindhi IMO ee lines lo hero yokka avedana bhavamu kanna anumanapu gunamu kanapadidhi | ||
| Mario_puzo Comedian Username: Mario_puzo Post Number: 1777 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 122.175.68.226 Rating: N/A |
lite tammud.......perceptions do differ all the time.....kiki, ala anukovali....leka pote batakalem | ||
| Nanigadu Side Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 3638 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 204.92.92.4 Rating: N/A |
Puzo annai naku ee pera chadivey sariki ee scene gurthocchindi... emi anukokey... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQTf5Pm10EQ When you point a fingre at some body remember that there are three fingers pointing at you and one finger pointing at God | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 17537 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 208.88.0.16 Rating: N/A |
bavund bavundhi....kaani program title "golusu katha" maree mass ga undhi...thread loki ravalantey ibbandhi ga undhi...cycle goru change it to "anthuleni katha" or something like that....koddhiga literature vadandi...plzzz | ||
| Mario_puzo Comedian Username: Mario_puzo Post Number: 1776 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 122.175.68.226 Rating: N/A |
i tried......rajesh to be continued tarvata nunchi...... Theater lonchi bayataki nadustunna.....anta cheekati ga undi.....cheekati,cheekati...cheekati anedi oka vyakikarana matrame ata asalu nijaniki adi undadu ata, velugu matram untundata.....dwandwam anukunta, evado chepadu.....evadu cheppadu??evado daridrudu, evadaite em!!......emi artham kavatla theater kada cheekati anukunna, arey adenti cheekatlo road sabdhalu, artham kavatlaaaa......ekkado kula badda anukunta.....idi road emo....kallu panicheyyatla..... "nayan tarse....nayan tarse"....evadra l*** kodku "situational song" pettaru......ohho idi naa jebu lonche mogutondi......ante naa phone..... aa tarvata intiki ela vellano, sarayu gunde meeda kottina debba manataniki terukotaniki enta mandu(valium) kavalsi vochindooo mee uhake vadilestunna.....aa theater lo tanani chusaka/tanu nannu chusaka malli tanu naku jeevitam lo kanapadala,call cheyyalaa...... naa perento telsukovalani unda.....edaite enti evado "vallakatlo ramayya" --------------------thus spake vallakatlo ramayya ************************************************************ ***************** ippati varaku atanu(atanu naku kuda peru cheppaledu let's call him Va Ra(vallakatlo ramayya)) cheppina swagatam vinnaru.......naa angle vinandi....... VaRa mata meeda nilabadatadu.........VaRa sarayu ni istapaddadu.....ista padatam ante apartham cheskunoru.......manasa vacha preminchadu ....kastapadi parichayam penchukunnadu.......parichayam tarvata prati adadi korukonedi aame ki ichadu.....adento telsa?? attention......18 gantalu ame tone matladevadu direct gano phone lono......prati nela puttinroju jaripevadu.......tanu lenide prapamcham ledu anettu pravartinchadu......sarayu atanni istapadindi......VaRa modata sarayu ni chusi ista padina daani kanna ekkuva VaRa ni sarayu istapadindi......indaka oka vishayam purti cheyyatam marchi poyanu.....atanu ameni manasa vacha preminchadu karamana kaminchadu.......iddaru saarirakamga daggarayyaru......VaRa ki sarayu lo teliyani ruchi telisindi.....telusukovalsina ruchi lekunda poindi.......tanu aame ki aame andaniki aa andanni chusina pichi lo mattu lo antaku mundu ee aada daniki cheyyani pratignya aame to chesadu......aame ni pelli chesukunta ani.....munde cheppa ga VaRa maata meeda nilabadatadu ani......konni rojulu deputation veyinchukuni b'lore velli poyadu......aame to matalu tagginchi poortiga manesadu.......aame college friends lo touch leni oka andagadini chusi, aa kurradiki aa kurradu kalalo kuda uhinchanidi okati asa chupinchi aa ammai to malli kalisela chesadu......akasmattu ga ontari aina pilla, enduku VaRa ala pravartisunnado artham kani samayam lo sarigga chusi aa kurradini usi kolpadu.......aa kurradu prema ga matladesariki, tandri la anunayinche sariki aa pichi pilla tattukoleka poindi......evari meedo chupinchalo teleeka, chupinchaka pote gundello overflow ai potunna prema ni ela kattadi cheyyalo teleeka, aa kurradiki ichindi....... bavundi.....mundu katha lo VaRa "..........kosam adigithe "Kick" cinemaki vellindhi " ani cheppadu kada.....kick cinema ki vellindi boy freind to ani evaraina intlo vallu cheptara?? mari ataniki ela telisnidi?? ee patiki meeku arthamayye untundi.....aa kurradu phone chesi cheppadu......adi VaRa adina natakaniki pataka sannivesam......malli sarayu phone cheyyaledu/cheyyadu ani telusu VaRa ki........idi maro devadasu katha kadu, maro manmadhuni katha....... intaki nenevarni anukuntunnara paina cheppina katha lo andamaina kurradni nene......dourbhagyudni, clg lo unna nalugellu sarayu mounamga ela aradinchanu......naa tahatu kadani telisi mamulu sneham to aapesanu.....ippudu ila ela chesanu, enduku chesanu, na valla kavatledu......kani, atanu naku istanannadi.......hmmmm tappavu konni......evari to aina badha cheppukunte taggutundani vinnanu.....meeto cheppukuntunnanu..........intaki naa peru cheppaledu kada....edaite emundi lendi....... -----------thus spake peru cheppukotaniki istapadani andamaina kurradu Mata tappani manishi} | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1167 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.141 Rating: N/A |
Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25417 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
aameni choosthoo vundevaadu...parichayam ayindhi nuvvu cheppinappude | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25416 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Edchinattu wrong word | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25415 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
endhi mama...Sarayu emanna vundhaa nee jeevitham lo | ||
| Sirivennela Junior Artist Username: Sirivennela Post Number: 291 Registered: 12-2008 Posted From: 71.58.123.132 Rating: N/A |
Mr.hyd and rajesh bros..me stories super.. rajesh annaay... " Manasu edchinattu vundhi..Kanti varaku ravataniki aham addochi Gonthu daggare aagi ibbandhi peduthondhi.... " nice one..but endukoo manasu edchinattu vundhi..ane line konchem framing sarigga ledu..inkedo meaning istondi..JMO | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25414 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
yeah....konni baaga vupayoga padathaayi mama "popular rachanalu cheyatam elaa" anedhi book | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1166 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.141 Rating: N/A |
tappadu annai .. tademela undi kadha (story) .. reasons strong ga unnayi ! Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3723 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
rao garu rachaitalu veru dialogue writes veru. razesh loni aa iddaru manushullo rendo manishi koncham extra work sesaad btw razesh good one though on the parichayam of hero-heroine there was some issues raised by Hyd. manchi rachayitalu avatam ela ane yandamuri book lo ilantivi baaga cheptaaDu. i dont know if it applies to cine writers but a good one though last min lo pottu lEdanaTam debba esindi. ayina parledu we will wait. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3918 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
kaani meelo machi dialogue writer daagi vunnadu mama. Okka Chance... Okka chance ani kashta padda RT gurtu vachaadu (from khadgam) If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Kdnumber1 Side Hero Username: Kdnumber1 Post Number: 3544 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 155.212.15.94 Rating: N/A |
Title aayanadi, Katha Evaridi...  | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25413 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Title naadhi kaadhu...yandamoori dhi...seppichukodathaadu nannu | ||
| Kdnumber1 Side Hero Username: Kdnumber1 Post Number: 3543 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 66.155.211.158 Rating: N/A |
nannu eero ni chesava ne katha lo  | ||
| Secondcup Junior Artist Username: Secondcup Post Number: 607 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 199.74.155.50 Rating: N/A |
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| Nanigadu Side Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 3637 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 204.92.92.4 Rating: N/A |
Razesh babai naku ending nacchindi... chala baga rasavu... title nacchaledu naku, kani heroe peru "Krishna" anna idea ki hats off... When you point a fingre at some body remember that there are three fingers pointing at you and one finger pointing at God | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25412 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Subbarao gaaru...choodandi ee Jana Samudram kanneeti varsham chilikisthunte...meeru flop antaaru | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25411 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
mama.....Hyd mama entha raasaado...nenu anthe raayaali anukunna....alantappudu rakarakaala scenes raasukoni....inkaa inkaa teesukellatam ishtam lekapoyindhi....Ok next time dialogues tho paatu Story paina kuda dhyasa pedathaa First Part flop ayindhani badha padaku rendodhi baa sedhaam.....nirasa padaku... First cinema flop ayindhani priyamani aagipoyindhaa.....Bikini ippi sawaal visaraledhaa.... | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1165 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.141 Rating: N/A |
annai .. touch chesaav .. Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Sachin Moderator Username: Sachin Post Number: 11402 Registered: 04-2008 Rating: N/A |
ayithe maga name kinda vesthaavaaa?...  | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14697 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: |
Nenu oppukonu... Razesh lo unna asalayina writer raayaledhu. Dialogs varaku I definitely give credit... but story endhuko manasu pettaledhu ani anukuntunna. Sorry Razesh.... manasu lo unna opinion frank ga sebuthunna. Enakku cover up teriyaadhu. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Sachin Moderator Username: Sachin Post Number: 11401 Registered: 04-2008 Rating: N/A |
mothamm sadavaledu.....at least try chesaaav kaabatti...  | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3916 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
madhyalo nenu raasina part teesesthe story flow baaga set avutundi, otherwise no. Enduku ante nenu hero - heroin aa job interview roje kalisaaru ani cheppa kadaa.. meeru emo 4 years nundi bus stop lo parichayam annaru. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25410 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
} ayyo....Krishaveni ....teluginti viri boni...song kuda innaamu.... General ga Krishna river ane antaaru...>Krishnamma ani anaru meeru mee logic lu | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3722 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
razesh naa logic and magic lantivi story lo joppinchi koncham side track chesavemo anipinchindi. overall given the short span of time a good one. 5 stars from my side  last min lo pottu lEdanaTam debba esindi. ayina parledu we will wait. | ||
| Sachin Moderator Username: Sachin Post Number: 11400 Registered: 04-2008 Rating: N/A |
krishna maga nadi peraaa?...  } | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25408 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Cinejeevi mama logic magic kuda nyayam chesaaa anukuntunna | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3915 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
excellent mama. Kaani konni dialogues valla U/A certificate vastundi emo  good one. Btw, KRISHNA nadi ni kuda KRISHNAMMA ane antaaru kadaa If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25407 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Whistles esinollaki, sappatlu kottinollaki, stars esinollandhariki  | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 4789 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
razesh mama...super rasaav...last kee krishna peru analogy maatram ultimate...yetta vastaai saami ittanti ideas...hats off... heroine nee bad sesinanduku neeku ippudu singles gudhuthaaru...venjoy!!! | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25406 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Rao gaaruu....prema vishadhantham ayinappude kadha feel vachedhi..... last lo boyinaalu vaddinchi group photo diganeeki manamemanna dasari gaari cinema teesthunnamaaa andi | ||
| Secondcup Junior Artist Username: Secondcup Post Number: 606 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 199.74.155.50 Rating: N/A |
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| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14693 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: N/A |
But ending maathram disappoint sesesaavu... frankly... maatalu meedha unna pattu.. story meeda raaledhu. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25403 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Subbarao gaaru...thread ki publicity thakkuvayindhi | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25402 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Doola teerindhi dheenamma...... ee paatiki cinemallo rendu scenes raasetodini .... endho raasaaa......dengulettakandi.....anthakuminchi burra pani cheyyale | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25401 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: |
Theatre lonchi bayatakochesaanu......araganta mundhu dhoodhi pinjelaa thaakina gaali...ippudu koradaa tho thaakuthunnattu ga anipisthondhi.... Bike start chesi bayatakochaanu...prathi aadadhanilo Sarayu kanipinche naaku...vichithramga ippudu prathi magavaadilo ATHADU kanipisthunnaadu.... Aaru nelala parichayaaniki intha badha paduthondhi manasu ani anukovataaniki ledhu.... aame ni naalugella kindhata idhe roju choosaanu.....Naa kosame puttindhanipinchindhi..... adhe Bus stop lo ee naalugellalo nalugu rojulu mathrame aamenu Miss ayyaanu... Naalugu rojulu kachithamga gurthupettukunnaanu ante cheppochu naa prema entha ghaadamaindho.... Aame gurthuku raani kshanam ledhu.....ee naalugellalo..... Thana parichayam kosam veyyani ethu ledhu..... Aa varsham mammalni kalipindhi.... Rathri naaku nidra pattaledhu.... Chutney tho aame peru raasaanu....entha andhamaina peru.....naadhi kaani peru... Tiffin thina budhi kaaledhu....cheyyi kadigesi Balcony loki vellaanu.....Aalochinchaalani.... em cheyyaali ippudu.....thanani elaa ayina naadhanni chesukovachu...thana kutumba paristhithi naakku telusu ..... 4 yella nunchi aame chuttu thiruguthunnaanu ante nenu preminchindhi aame vyaktithvaanni kaadu, aame andhaanni.....mari aame character elaantidhi ayithe naakenduku..... alaa ani aame manasulo inkokaru vunnappudu nannu pellaadi marchipogaladhaa....kachithamga marchipovachu....entha mandhi sthree purushulu kapuram cheyyatam ledhu.... Prema lo priyudokkade kanipisthaadu....Pelli tarvatha masina battalu, edhuguthunna pillalu andharu kanipisthaaru..... Kindha calling Bell mogindhi.....aame ayyundochu....Senivaaram bellu kotti lepe sahasam aame kaaka inkevaru chesthaaru.... thalupu teesaanu.....aame...navvindhi.....pedhaalu choodaledhu...Kallu choosaanu...aparaadha bhavam kanipisthondhi "Ninna theatre lo palakarinchaledhemi" "ante cinema kochi dhenikochaaru ani adagatam baagodhani..." "inkedhaina matladochugaa" "Inkedho matladatam naaku chetha kaadhu Sarayu....akkada matladalanipinchaledhu..vachesaanu" "Endukani...." "Neeku samadhanam telisina prasnalaki nenu thirigi cheppukovatam dwaara neeku aanandam kaliginche panaithe malli Chepthaanu.... I love you...Nenu ninnu premisthunnanu.....nenu korukunna ammayi inkokari vodilo thala pettukoni padukoni vunte..... Cool drinks pattukochentha challati manasu naaku ledhu" "...." "...Athani peru Sagar, rendu nelala nunchi parichayam....." "Pelli chesukundhamanukuntunnaraa...." "Ledhu....athaniki vere ammayitho nischithardham ayindhi....Chivariga veedkolu palakataaniki mathrame ninna kalisaanu....." "Naaku ee vishayam enduku cheppaledhu....nenu ninnu premisthunnaanani teleedhaa" "Telusu...kaani ....." "athanu lenappudu inka problem emundhi......nenu ninnu kshamisthaanu ante nannu pelli chesukuntaavaaa...." "antee......mee intlo abhyantharam lekapotheee" "hahaha......Entha amayakudini sarayu nenu... Pelli chesukodu ani telisi kuda bhujam pai vaali chethilo cheyyi vesi nimirentha goppa manasu naaku ledhu.....Inkoka sthree ki chendhabothunnadani telisi kuda vontariga kalavataniki ishtapadda nee antha thegimpu naaku ledhu....Nenu magaadini...andhari lanti magaadini.... Ee aaru nelala parichayam lo nee prema gurinchi cheppaledhu.....ippudu kuda theatre lo choosaanu kabatti cheppaavu...lekapothe manam aanandamga pelli chesukoni vundevaallam.....Mana biddaki SAGAR ane peru petti nuvvu mudhaadithe....Thalli prema ani nenu murisipoyevaadini.....vaadilo priyudini choosukoni nuvvu murisipoyedhaanivi.... Nuvvu naaku vadhu Sarayu....Nannu nenu premisthaanu.....Ninnu kuda premisthunnaanu...... Reppodhuna pelli ayyaaka viraha thaapam lo nuvvu kallu moosukoni mooliginappudu nannenaa SAGAR gurthochaadaaa ani naa manasulo aalochana vachinappudu jeevitham narakam la anipisthundhi.... Kabatti... Nannu pelli chesukovatam naakante neeke ekkuva pramadhakaram" "inthenaa......nannu vellipommantaavaaa" "kachithamgaa vellipo Sarayu.... Veelaithe Nee sagar ni saadhinchuko....lekapothe marichipoyi ninnu artham chesukone bhartha ni sampadhinchuko.....Vollo edchi, juttu nimire prema kaakunda....pelli mathrame parakaashta ga preminchu.....Maro Sagar dorukuthaadu.......Ninnu preminchataaniki naalugellu pattindhi.....marichipovataaniki maro naalugellu pattochu....Kaalam a gayaanni ayina maanputhundhi" Kanneeru vachindhi idhariki......nanne choosthoo venakki thirigindhi...Door varaku velli thirigi choosindhi..... Thanani thirigi pilichi naalo kalupukuntaanani.....No way.... Ganga ayina, kaveri ayina, Sarayu ayinaa....Kalavaalsindhi SAGARam lone.........maro nadhilo kaadhu.... Inthaki naa peru cheppaledhu kadhu....Yamuna, Ganga, Godavari lanti Andhamaina aadavaari perlunnaa....Naalaa ekaakiga migilina oke okka maga nadhi pere naa Peru... "KRISHNA, KRISHNA na peru" Aame thalupu moosesindhi.....Vellipoye vuntundhi....Naa jeevitham lonchi kudaa Athadu Aame Priyudu | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3718 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
story to be contd annadu razesh.. last min lo pottu lEdanaTam debba esindi. ayina parledu we will wait. | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14687 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: N/A |
You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Joey Junior Artist Username: Joey Post Number: 141 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 188.220.145.2 Rating: N/A |
 PRP fans POLITICALLY ENDANGERED species...vallani manam kaapadukovali..appudey politics lo konchem comedy migili untadhi..lekapothey dinosaurs laga extinct ayipotharu... | ||
| Nanigadu Side Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 3633 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 204.92.92.4 Rating: N/A |
Hyder nee dantlo spell mistake vundi... jara jagratha... Anand chusthey vadilipettaru When you point a fingre at some body remember that there are three fingers pointing at you and one finger pointing at God | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3717 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
anTe nenu stories rayakapoina one time reading lo alanti chinna chinnavi addostaai. especially 4 yrs parichayam inkaa freindship sthaayilo unDadu kadaa anna logic.. aa paatiki pelli, vidakulu kooda aipoye chance undigaa. anyway good narration and twists...go ahead last min lo pottu lEdanaTam debba esindi. ayina parledu we will wait. | ||
| Nanigadu Side Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 3632 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 204.92.92.4 Rating: N/A |
ee line super babai, chala baga rasavu... When you point a fingre at some body remember that there are three fingers pointing at you and one finger pointing at God | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3912 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
or ladies emo... heroin ni -ve shade lo choopinchinanduku If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3911 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Aap mahaan ho... btw, good catch If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 4785 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
//Aaaaaa.... naakevaro single esaaru// hero fans anukuntaaa...kiki | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25399 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: |
ante 48 months parichayam ani | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25398 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
Aaaaaa.... naakevaro single esaaru .....  | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3716 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
razesh nee story lo "naalugellu parichayamunna moham ayina" annaav. My Hyd few months annaaDu. so continuity lo ilantivi okasari check chesuko last min lo pottu lEdanaTam debba esindi. ayina parledu we will wait. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3909 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Yeah, good one. Continue razesh bro. Routine kakundaa diff climax ivvu If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 4784 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
story lo twist bhalay pettav mama...loved these lines Manasu edchinattu vundhi...Kanti varaku ravataniki aham addochi Gonthu daggare aagi ibbandhi peduthondhi.... | ||
| Nanigadu Side Hero Username: Nanigadu Post Number: 3631 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 204.92.92.4 Rating: N/A |
Hyder babai... i like it, chala baga narrate chesavu... naku ee line baga nacchindi "Naaku tanu parichayam ayyi konnalle ayinaa, yuga yugaalu gaa pravahisthunna sarayu nadi laa janma janma la bandham laa anipistundi" When you point a fingre at some body remember that there are three fingers pointing at you and one finger pointing at God | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25396 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: |
Sarayu baaga gurthosthondhi ee roju.... ee maata padhe padhe anukovatam gurthu ravatam kante ibbandhi peduthondhi... Ninna Sarayu intiki phone chesi thana kosam adigithe "Kick" cinemaki vellindhi ani cheppaaru....release ayina 100 rojula tarvatha vellatam ento artham kaaledhu......naaku vellalanipinchindhi...kaadhu kaadhu...thanani akkada choodalanipinchindhi.... Theatre daggaraki ragaane naaku telusthondhi...aame ee chuttu pakkale vundhi ani.....adhento Sarayu tho premalo paddappati nunchi prathi aadapilla aame laane kanipisthondhi.....Sarayu yemo ani choodatam, ammayilani eppudu choodaledhaa annattu vaallu choodatam...neninkedho choodatam .... Thanani vethukuthoone theatre lo adugu pettaanu.... "Prapancham maa idharini vadhili vaallu mathram tera venakki vellipoyinattu" theatre antha kaaliga vundhi. 100 rojula tarvatha theatre kaaliga vundatam lo aascharyam emundhi.....vethukuthoo cheekatlo oka moolana koorchunnanu.....aame kosam naa kallu vethikaayi, sareeraaniki mathram siggu addosthondhi.... oka moolaga oka janta kanapadindi.... Sarayu kuda naa pakkane alaa koorchunte.....anipinchindhi...navvochindhi....ventane mayamaindhi.... Evarakkada....aa Janta lo koorchunnadhi Sarayu yenaa.....avvakoodadu bhagavanthudaa anipinchindhi....Evaro kalla paina mainum posinattugaa..naa kallu masaka baaruthunnaayi.....naalugellu parichayamaina mohamainaa....enduko aame ni gurthu pattalekapothunnanu....aame ani telusthoo vundhi....pakkane andhagaadaina inko magavaadi bhujam paina thala petti...chethilo cheyyi vesi....koorchundhi aame....nischayamgaa aame .... Manasu edchinattu vundhi...Kanti varaku ravataniki aham addochi Gonthu daggare aagi ibbandhi peduthondhi.... Vayasochina aada pilla ni corner seat lo koochobetti cheyyi nimire annayya vunduntaadaaa Theatre kaaliga vuntundhi kabatti samajam mana snehaaniki musugu veyyadhani cinema ki teesukochina snehithudu ayyuntaadaa..... Kasi teeraa edavalanipinchindhi naaku.......Theatre lonchi vellipovalanipinchindhi.....lechaanu.....aame nannu choosindhi....athani cheyyi vadhilesindhi....bhujam paina thala teesindhi....navvaleka navvindhi...okappudu navvinappudu aame navvu ni mathrame choosevaadini....ippudu engili padda pedhaalu ni choosi naaku navvalanipinchindhi.... To be contd.... | ||
| Kamal Comedian Username: Kamal Post Number: 1152 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 130.36.62.142 Rating: N/A |
super ... Ishaa Vaasyamidam sarvam, yatkincha jagatyaam jagat | Tena tyaktena bhunjeethaah maa gridhah kasyaswiddhanam || | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 17527 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 208.88.0.16 Rating: N/A |
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| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 4783 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
hyder kaka...kummav...very good narration | ||
| Kingaa_bongaa Side Hero Username: Kingaa_bongaa Post Number: 5384 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 69.174.58.20 Rating: N/A |
varsham peddadhi ainaa work commone kadhandiii Manaki Manam Kingu, Choosevallaki Bongu. Proud to be Never-been-banned CCDB'r | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25393 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
inkaa vundhaa...samaptham aa.....inka raayi veelaithe | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14683 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Razesh... nee turn vacchindi... different color tho post sesuko... end of the story... title kooda nuvve decide ayipo. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3903 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
I am done. Over to Razesh bro. Otherwise length maree ekkuva ayipoyi maha bharatham avutundi If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14681 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
baagundi... are you continuing or leaving to Razesh? Nee part ayipoyaaka... let Razesh know. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3899 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: |
Sarayu aloochanala tho vere lokam lo munigi vunna nenu, "yeraa inko dosa veyyamantaavaa?" anna amma pilupu tho vuliki padi ee lokam lo ki vachanu. Plate lo vunna dosalu inkaa alaage vunnayi. Plate pakkane table meeda vunna letters choodagaane navvu vachindi. Eppudu raasaano kuda teliyadu kaani table meeda chutney tho SARAYU ani raasa Samayochitam gaa tv lo "ee vela lo neevu em chesthu vuntaavu" paata raavadam modalayyindi. Intaki Sarayu evaro cheppa ne ledu kadu... Naaku tanu parichayam ayyi konnalle ayinaa, yuga yugaalu gaa pravahisthunna sarayu nadi laa janma janma la bandham laa anipistundi Maa iddari parichayam chaala gammathu gaa jarigindi konta kaalam kritam. Aa roju vipareetamaina varsham early morning nundi. Nenu nemmadigaa car drive chesthu veltunna office ki. Footpath meeda umbrella pattukoni slow ga nadusthu veltundi oka ammayi. Anta pedda varsham lo anta chinna umbrella emi help avadam ledu anukuntaa.. tanu almost tadichi poyindi. Slow gaa tana pakkana car aapi window role chesi adigaa "Hello, lift kaavala andi?" Oka nimusham nannu, naa car ni, chuttu parisaraalu ani choosi "Sure" ani car ekkindi. "Inta pedda varsham lo ekkadiki veltunnaru?" "Job interview vundi andi ikkada daggarlo. Ee road runing varaku auto lo vachaka akkada water lo auto engine fail ayindi. Vere auto dorakaledu. Time avutundi ani nadichi vasthunna. Thanks for your help" "Ponee interview re-schedule cheyamani adagaka poyaaraa?" "Aa manager chaala old school type ani maa friend cheppindi andi. She works there. Interview kosam aa maatram kashtapadi raaleraa ani anna antaadu ani cheppindi. Manishi ki 30 years kuda levu kaani thoughts maatram baamma kaalam thoughts ani cheppindi" "Mari inni telisi atani daggara job ki enduku veltunnaru?" "Em chestham cheppandi. Company chaala manchidi. Leka leka interview call vachindi ression time lo. Konchem exp vasthe tarvata jump cheyochu" "Inkaa ee job raaledu appude next job gurinchi plan chesthunnare?" "Ippudu meeru kuda aa manager type lo maatladutunnaru" "sarle andi. intaki ye company lo interview?" "Gayatri Finance" Aprayatnamgaa naa kaalu break meeda ki vellindi. Already wet road kaavadam tho car skid ayyi curb ki velli dhee kottindi. Tarvata interview room lo emi jarigi vuntundo meeru oohinchagalaru. alaa modalaina maa parichayam 6 moths lo chaala munduki vellindi. Maa iddari abhiprayalu, alochanalu complete opposite ayinappatiki kuda manchi friends ayyam. May be that's why people say "opposite poles attract" Ee rojo, repo maa relation ni friendship stage nundi next stage ki teesuku velle question tana mundu vunchudaam anukune time lo, anukokundaa ninna oka sanghatana jarigindi. Ninna night intiki vachaka sarigaa nidra pattaledu. SARAYU baaga gurthu ku vasthondi ee roju If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25367 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
varnee..inka try chesthunnavaa...naaku eeda pack avuthondhi...nee range ni minchagalano ledho ani | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3898 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Try chesthunnaa... If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Razesh Moderator Username: Razesh Post Number: 25358 Registered: 12-2006 Rating: N/A |
wah...naaku nachindhi....Mr.Hyd mama nuvvu kummu...nenu naa prayatnam nenu settaa | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14671 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: N/A |
I will add you both for next week. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Raajakeeyam Junior Artist Username: Raajakeeyam Post Number: 57 Registered: 11-2009 Posted From: 98.217.200.102 Rating: N/A |
Nenu try chestanu ...give me a chance manchini grahinchu chedunu vadileyyi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14670 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: N/A |
Good suggestion... Hyder & Razesh... different colors use sesukondi mee versions ki. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Methhanithodugu Comedian Username: Methhanithodugu Post Number: 1144 Registered: 12-2008 Posted From: 59.96.101.117 Rating: N/A |
Meeku Sappetantha Vaadiini kaadu gaani oka chinna Maaata Put Story in one Unique Color Best of Luck Naa Full 2 Kasi Suffort}} Methhani-thodugu- SOFTWARE "A great leader's courage to fulfill his vision comes from passion,not positionâ | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14669 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.18.228 Rating: N/A |
Feel free to establish the relation too... LOVE THEME ki inni questions aa..... You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3895 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Unless you want it to be a one page ultra short story, please establish characters a little bit. Sarayu evaru? hero ki emavutundi etc. Ninnati incident emito nenu start chesthaa If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14668 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Maree restricted avuddemo ani... just 2 characters iccha... feel free to add more... and love theme ani seppa kadha... inka ekkuva kaavali ante etta? You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Gandhiguevara Junior Artist Username: Gandhiguevara Post Number: 451 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 76.109.140.171 Rating: N/A |
Annaay...naaku inka chaala mandi gurtostunnaaru....naa peru kudaa list lo yesko | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3893 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
 Rendu mukkalu raasi mee part ayi poyindi ante etta?  Story start chesi, characters establish chestha annaru ??If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14666 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Interested candidates perlu list seyyandi brother... I will add them for the next week. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14665 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Mr. Hyder... you continue it from here now. Enjoy maadi. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14664 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
STORY: Adi Saturday Usual ga Saturday ante endhuko special ga feel avuthanu may be I was born on Saturday. Early morning legavadam Suprabhatham play chesthu oka cup coffee tho news paper chadavadam... then breakfast chesthu TV lo vacche patha songs kosam channels anni vethakadam oka routine ayipoyindi. Prathi Saturday la ga ne ee roju kooda start ayyindi but manasu antha ninna jarigina incident chuttu ne thiruguthunnadi. Endhuko 'Sarayu' baaga gurthuku vasthundi...... You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Ford Junior Artist Username: Ford Post Number: 64 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 208.54.90.51 Rating: N/A |
Sodi Papayya | ||
| Pichhikaki Comedian Username: Pichhikaki Post Number: 1616 Registered: 05-2008 Posted From: 216.38.53.127 Rating: N/A |
Cylone tamud, audience ki scope ivvu | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14663 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Ee story ki title will be decided by the person who is ending the story. So title will be declared at the end of the story. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14662 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
Chinna rules laa ga set sesukunte better ani anukuntunna. From my side: 1. Genre (for this week): LOVE 2. If possible run the male character without a name, Rakshasudu novel ni rendu parts lo Yandamoori peru lekunda 'athadu' ani refer setta raasaru... aa style lo continue seyyadaaniki try seyyandi if possible. 3. Writers ni alphabetical order lo set settunna ee week ki... so Mr. Hyder will continue from me and Razesh will end the story. Next week I will swap the order. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi | ||
| Cylonesubbarao Hero Username: Cylonesubbarao Post Number: 14661 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 170.61.20.228 Rating: N/A |
'Golusu Kadha'.... Concept emiti ante... I will start a premise for a story... then Mr.Hyderabad will continue it... ekkado oka chota aapesi... he has to hand it to Razesh... eee week story ni Razesh ending settadu. Dhaar kurrodu kanapadadam ledhu kabatti... next week set setta aa kurrodu ni. You must be the change you wish to see in the world - Mahatma Gandhi |
