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     111 Side Hero Username: 111 Post Number: 3073 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 198.185.18.207 Rating: N/A |
MrHyder...nee version climax bhagundhi playt tho compare chesthe... | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3359 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
http://vizaggirl.blogspot.com/2009/01/telugu-novel-duppatlo- minnagu.html finger meeda pandem okate common anukuntaa  If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 176 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Hyderabad. Nidra pattatledu. Anduke DBing. Nellore parledu. Edho undi. Pogathota (maa colony) peru maarchaaru KVR Nagar ani.  There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 175 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Duppatlo Minnagu storyline idi: Hero adavi lo oka cottage lo nidrapothunnappudu duppatlo oka minnaagu dooruthundi. Kadilithe kaatesthundemo nani bhayam tho almost chasthaadu. Last ki elago duppati teesthaaru... Minnaagu kanipinchadu. Asalu nijamga minnaagu undhaa ledaa annadi open gaa vadilesthaadu reader ki. Daaniki nee story ki sambandham ento naaku bodha paDatam ledu. Dharmam gaaru clarify chesthe baaguntundi. There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Dharmam Junior Artist Username: Dharmam Post Number: 655 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 206.16.32.136 Rating: N/A |
Yandamuri suspense baga maintain chestadu | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3358 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
meero vomerica lo vunnaraa? india lo ayithe ee time lo dbing enti? How is nellore? Almost 18 months ayindi nellore ki vachi... If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Dharmam Junior Artist Username: Dharmam Post Number: 654 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 206.16.32.136 Rating: N/A |
Anta avesam enduku, andulo four/five stories untayi andulo okati, | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3357 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
original basic story idea oka english aayanadi. tarvata oka alfred hitchcock movie lo oka scene chesaaru. Platy annai kobbari bondam lo vundi annaru. CineJ said it is in luck movie also. So mana yandamoori kuda alaage inspired emo  If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 174 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Duppatlo Minnaagu story idhaa??? Emi maatlaadutunnaavu mama??? Please explain. There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 3371 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
hyder kaka, ur version is the better than platy's. anyways...meeru konni scenes lo conversations baaga rasaaru[last time stories kee a big change]...keep it up Why so Serious? | ||
| Dharmam Junior Artist Username: Dharmam Post Number: 653 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 206.16.32.136 Rating: N/A |
Same yandamuri story undi, Dupatlo Minnagu ani | ||
| Jalsa Side Hero Username: Jalsa Post Number: 7224 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 159.53.110.141 Rating: N/A |
Hyder, your climax is better. | ||
| Ishan Junior Artist Username: Ishan Post Number: 438 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 12.50.172.130 Rating: N/A |
ur version is better | ||
| Ishan Junior Artist Username: Ishan Post Number: 437 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 12.50.172.130 Rating: N/A |
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| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 172 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Ante nee uddhesham nenu oka psycho gaadini anaa?  There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3356 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Oops ...read it as... But the sound didn't come from where Amit, Vivek and Stranger were standing If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 170 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
 There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 169 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Nijam cheptunnaa... This is MUCH MUCH BETTER than my climax. You should post this everywhere. There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Kish Side Hero Username: Kish Post Number: 8308 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 98.228.118.188 Rating: N/A |
 "It is difficult to say what is impossible, for the dream of yesterday is the hope of today and reality of tomorrow" - Robert Goddard | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3355 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Sare nenu anukunna Climax idi: There was huge sound of wood cracking and an instantaneous loud scream... But the sound didn't come from where Amit, Vivek and platy were standing. It actually came from the room entrance. Someone broke the wooden door open and the girl screamed as she saw the big knife in stranger's hand which was in air... Amit and Vivek were shocked. Girl was still in shock. Look on her face said, she had no clue about the bet. 2 guys who broke the door came inside quickly and disarmed the stranger. He didn't resist. They have taken him into custody. Before leaving the room they turned to Amit and said "Next time someone challenges you with this kind of bet... get his head examined first" Amit was still in shock. Vivek recovered first and asked the girl "Why are you hanging out with this guy?" She didn't understand "I have no clue who he is. He just asked me if he can sit at the table and i said yes" "Then why did you agree for such a stupid bet? Why did you agree to be involved?" She said "What are you talking about?" Now vivek understood. He didn't want to hurt the girl's feelings by explaining the complete details of the bet. Obviously she was innocent. So he asked her one final question "what did he tell you before you came to our table and said yes" She paused for a minute and replied "He asked me to be a Judge - to check who among you would jump longer in to the pool from the upstairs window" THE END !! If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 3009 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
ee lighter episode ee madhya vachchina LUCK/LUCKY ane cinema lo undi ikkaDa emi raayaalO inkaa alOchinchalEdu. | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 167 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
Psychologists aade gaames alaage vuntaayi. Poni koothuru kaadu sister anukondi By the way, just to clarify. Nenu Hyd mama story ni hijack cheyyaledu. AthanE "emanna clues unte cheppandi elaa muginchaalo" ani adigithe response icchaanu anthe - a spin off of "Kobbari Bondam" story. There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Proline Side Hero Username: Proline Post Number: 3584 Registered: 06-2008 Posted From: 69.250.69.37 Rating: N/A |
mee climax ento pettandi..chadivi cheptham..bagundochu ga.... ... | ||
| Jalsa Side Hero Username: Jalsa Post Number: 7223 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 159.53.46.140 Rating: N/A |
enti saami...koothuru ni inkokaditho pampinchadaaniki ready ayyaada father? | ||
| Jalsa Side Hero Username: Jalsa Post Number: 7222 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 159.53.46.140 Rating: N/A |
Climax was a let down Hyder mama  | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3354 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Ask platy ee ending nachaledu ante, my version climax ni thu antaaru emo If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Ishan Junior Artist Username: Ishan Post Number: 435 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 12.50.172.130 Rating: N/A |
Story was good but the ending was a bit disappointing. also, How can a mid 30 year old have a daughter in early 20s? | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3353 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: |
ee story ki climax platy mama ichaaru... it was much better than my version. So here is his version: Amit gaadu tension tho shake ayi 10th time try kooda cheyyadu. Appudu stranger gaadu "Nenu Psychologist ni. Idi naa koothuru. Nee OA choosi neeku buddhi cheppaali ani ilaa chesaanu" antaadu. Khel khatam. Kahani khatam. Platy mama, thanks! If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3352 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Vivek counted "SEVEN" Amit was very excited. Almost over.. what a loser this stranger is he thought. Vivek returned the look to the pool where couple of guys were talking to the girl. Finally she pointed her hand to the room window. And those 2 guys started running towards stairs. Girl also followed them. Vivek didn't understand what was happening. Amit tried it again and it worked !! even though it was almost over... he was still tensed looking at the big knife in stranger's hand. Vivek announced "EIGHT". Amit asked "Are you sure you want to go proceed still?" "Why? Are you scared now?" "You are almost losing... and you are asking me if i am scared?" "Still two more turns. Anything can happen you know" he said hinting at the knife. Vivek was sensing something was wrong. He wanted to stop. But he knew that nobody would listen to him now. Amit was getting ready to try again. Stranger adjusted his position and gripped the handle of the knife strongly. He looked almost sure to... finally amit tried again... there was huge sound of wood cracking and an instantaneous loud scream... If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3351 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Stranger turned to Vivek and asked "Please count for us" Vivek nodded silently as he couldn't convince anyone else. Amit took the lighter to his right hand and ready to go.Stranger was ready with big knife aimed at Amit's left hand. Amit rolled the wheel on the lighter with his thumb. And it light. A small yellow flame erupted from the lighter. Vivek said "ONE" loudly so that everyone can hear. Amit waited for few seconds before trying it again. Stranger was patiently waiting. Amit's heart beat was slowly raising but he was very confident. He tried it again. And the flame came out. Vivek announced "TWO" "THREE" "FOUR" "FIVE" Amit was getting happier but strangely he was sweating. Vivek was also biting his nails in tension. He looked outside the window for a second and got surprised at the scene near pool. But he his vision brought back in to the room with the sound of another click. "SIX" he announced. And he tried to look at the pool again while Amit was waiting for few seconds break. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 6564 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 159.182.1.4 Rating: N/A |
iddariki baa stories cheppe alavatu undi kada! intlo workout avutonda?? Ekkado munigi ikkada tela | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3350 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
no idea on kobbari bondam. but as i said i read it longtime ago somewhere. naalage aa cinema lo kuda copy kottaru emo... opps inspired emo If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3349 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Vivek warned "Amit, what are you doing? It's a stupid bet. This man is stupid. He must have gone mad. Stop this now" Amit didn't listen to him. His eyes were still focusing at the girl. Stranger intervened "I overheard that your friend is very good at these kind of challenges. And that he never loses" "Yes, that's right. And i don't even have to think twice for this silly bet on lighter" And at the same time amit got a doubt. "What if she doesn't agree to come with me after i win. I need to hear YES from her before we proceed" "OK, that's not a problem. Give me a minute" said stranger and walked to the girl. He spoke with her for few minutes and came back to Amit with her. She didn't look very convinced. She looked at all of them as if they are all stupids. "So are you ready for out bet?" asked Amit. She hesitated for a minute and said "Sure. But are you sure?" "I am damn sure" amit said excitedly. Stranger turned to amit and said "Let's go upstairs to my room" pointing to a window which is directly on top of the pool. Vivek stopped amit one more time. "He is on to something. Don't go" But amit didn't listen. Stranger turned to Vivek and said "You can join us as a Judge if you have any doubts". Amit and stranger walked towards the stairs. Vivek wanted to go to the girl to have a word but they asked him to follow. Once inside the room, stranger called for room service and requested them to send "Few beers, one big kitchen knife, few nails and a long rope" In 10 mins he got everything he ordered. He asked Amit to keep his left hand on the drawing table. Amit looked suspiciously. He explained "If the lighter doesn't work, you might drop out from the challenge. So I will tie your hand to table and will ready with knife" Amit and Vivek exchanged looks. Vivek's 6th sensed something is wrong. He continued "So if the lighter fails, i will immediately chop off the finger. So you can't back out" Vivek shouted "man, you are sick. you are out of your mind" and turned amit "let's get out of here. This is insane" Amit looked at the girl from the window. She was now getting ready to jump into the pool. He got excited again. Stranger hammered 2 nails on to the table and then took amit's left hand and tied to the nails on the table with rope. Even though Amit is very adventurous in nature, a small chill went up his spine. His heart rate has started increasing slowly. "Are you ready?" asked stranger. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Platypus Junior Artist Username: Platypus Post Number: 163 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.175.84.125 Rating: N/A |
MrHyd annaayi.. Kobbari Bondam story naa??? There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 3361 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
//Well, it isn't just enough to get good things. You should be able to know how to use those" said Amit hinting about the girl with him. He understood but still remained calm "Sometimes it happens. They go bad" "Mine does not" shot back amit immediately. "So are you saying that your lighter never fails to light?" "Yes, it never fails" // hyder...ee conv chala baaga raasaav Why so Serious? | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3348 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
At the same time Amit looked at the able where this odd looking man was sitting. He didn't look like he belonged in that club. Something was strange about him. But what really caught Amit's eye was the pretty girl who was sitting with him on the table. Amit was even more intrigued. He could clearly see that girl was ultra modern. He turned his head away from them but his mind was still thinking about them. She was a very attractive young girl barely in her 20s. And this guy must be in his mid 30s. Why would she go hang out with a guy like this he thought. They weren't talking much except for few words now and then. His thoughts were disturbed by Vivek who just came back with the beer. "Hey Vivek, look at the girl on the table to your left. Isn't she HOT?" whispered Amit. "Hmm.. she is good. But looks like she is taken already" "May be she never met someone like me till now" said amit with a naughty smile. "Shut up man. They can hear us easily" warned Vivek. And suddenly, the guy got up from his seat walked towards Amit and Vivek's table. Vivek got tensed but Amit looked like he didn't bother much. He came straight to their table and introduced himself. "Hi, Do you guys have a lighter?" Vivek was about reach out to his pocket when Amit winked his eye to stop. "Sure, we do. But how come you are sitting here with cigarettes but no lighter" quizzed amit trying to engage him into a conversation. "Mine stopped working suddenly" he answered. "Is your lighter also as old as your shoes" teased Amit looking at his shoes which looked very old. "No, i just bought it couple of days ago. But looks like it is dead already" he patiently answered. "Well, it isn't just enough to get good things. You should be able to know how to use those" said Amit hinting about the girl with him. He understood but still remained calm "Sometimes it happens. They go bad" "Mine does not" shot back amit immediately. "So are you saying that your lighter never fails to light?" "Yes, it never fails" "Shall we make a small bet on it?" proposed the odd looking guy. "Hahha.. you must be kidding. You wanna bet with me?" amit was laughing out loud. The guy was slowly loosing his patience. He wanted to teach him a lesson. "Yes, if your lighter works 10 times on a row then i would give the girl with me to you for today". Amit and Vivek both got stunned at his proposal. Amit asked him again. And he confirmed that "yes, if it works for 10 times in a row, you can have the girl" Amit almost jumped from his chair on hearing the unexpected bet. Vivek was still trying to understand what this stranger just said. "Ok, what do i need to bet from my side?" asked Amit. "Nothing much. If you win you take the girl. If you loose, i will take your little finger". "What?" amit almost screamed. "yes, you heard it right. If you loose, i will take your little finger" Vivek got up and said "You are out of your mind or what?" "No, i am not. Why Amit? Are you scared?" he was teasing amit now. "What do you mean you take my little finger?" amit was still trying to understand the bet. "I will cut your little finger and take it with me if you loose" Amit was slowly trying to recover from the shock of this strange, unexpected challenge. He looked at the girl again. She was really hot. He was staring at her for few seconds thinking about the bet. She just looked at him and smiled. He decided to take the bet. "Yes, i am ready for the bet" amit announced still looking at the girl. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Mikkymouse Comedian Username: Mikkymouse Post Number: 1935 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 216.111.115.2 Rating: N/A |
 Mundara kallaki bhandhama?
Memu eppudoo ready kaanee cinema 5 mins ads 30 mins type lo chinna chinna mukkalu evening varaku oorinchi postithe vachi eveninge chaduvuthamu. | ||
| Jalsa Side Hero Username: Jalsa Post Number: 7220 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 159.53.78.140 Rating: |
hyder...ila story ni long gaps lo post chestey interest pothundhi. take your time and compile the complete story and post in different posts within 5-10 mins intervals. mariii delay ayithe interest pothundhi. | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 3356 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
//One odd looking guy was listening to Amit and Vivek's discussion and bet from a table near by.// hyder, udhar baitt kay logoan kaa baatha sun raa... good going... Why so Serious? | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3347 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
Country Club, Hyderabad. It was 7 PM on a Saturday night. Amit and Vivek were relaxing in pool side chairs. Amit came to Hyderabad on the same day to attend some business meeting. They were trying to catch up on old times. Both of them went to the same college in Delhi 3 years ago. After college, Vivek came back to his home town Hyderabad. Amit was a Delhiite. Both of them were very different in nature yet they became good friends in college. Amit was full of energy, sportive, adventurous and funny. Vivek was complete opposite. He was very reserved, studious, humble and matured. They were the perfect example of 'opposite poles attract'. Amit was boasting about his latest girl friend(s) when then ran out of Beer. Pool side area was a self service location as the club didn't want to disturb the privacy of the guests. If it has been any other day, Vivek must have volunteered to go and get the beer. But today, he was too lazy for some reason. He just didn't feel like getting up from the chair. Amit was surprised but he didn't want to go up there either. As usually, an idea flashed in his mind spontaneously. "Hey Vivek, why don't we have a small bet? Who ever loses will have to go and get the beer" "Not again Amit. You and your silly bets. Nobody can ever win against you" responded Vivek recalling his college days. "Come on dude, It is a simple bet. Let's just toss the coin and decide" "No Amit, i am not interested. Go and play your silly tricks on a girl" Amit persuaded vivek to the bet and WON (as usually). Vivek always wondered whether it is luck or trick that makes him WIN all the time. He slowly got up and walked back to the drinks station in upstairs. Amit got busy looking at the babes in the pool. Hyderabad girls are hot he thought. And then his casanova in him was wondering whether he could be get lucky today with one of those hot chicks. One odd looking guy was listening to Amit and Vivek's discussion and bet from a table near by. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you | ||
| Jodhaa Hero Username: Jodhaa Post Number: 11108 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 75.185.64.4 Rating: N/A |
I am IN.. | ||
| Cinejeevi Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi Post Number: 2969 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 65.244.125.146 Rating: N/A |
tammudoo nee story lo aardrata takkuvayyi akkaraleni sanghatanalu ekkuvavutunnayi. couple those in initial days were really nice to read. to KISS okati rendu posts lo mugincheyi story ni.. TIA Special Note: 3 months chiru ni emi anakundaa naakunna manchi peru saaswatam chesukovalani decide ayya. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 3346 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120 Rating: N/A |
iStory ante Inspired story ani ardham (You might have heard it. So no spoilers please ) Anyone ready for the matinee ?? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ CHALLENGE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you |
