| Author | Message | ||
     Jp_rocks Junior Artist Username: Jp_rocks Post Number: 26 Registered: 06-2009 Posted From: 155.94.62.222 Rating: N/A |
i've never written any poems..i had resorted to blogging when i broke up vth my ex..but that damn thing was pushing me into deeper n darker waters..so i let it go.. | ||
| Jp_rocks Junior Artist Username: Jp_rocks Post Number: 25 Registered: 06-2009 Posted From: 155.94.62.222 Rating: N/A |
gr8 poem der bro..ur usage of death is v touching..overall, loved ur poem.. terrific.. | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1099 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
ur right..need not..actually....but u are right I sub consciously tend to do so...may be because I am not trained in poetry....or language formally.....since I wrote it for expression...I think if the expression came through properly...it would serve my purpose | ||
| Wrathchild Side Hero Username: Wrathchild Post Number: 4217 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 69.136.169.198 Rating: N/A |
poem bavundi,but Why should a poem/poetry always rhyme? 100% badha or santosham lo puttina poems ki rhyming undali ani conscious ela untundi? | ||
| Chikitha Side Hero Username: Chikitha Post Number: 2277 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 159.53.46.141 Rating: N/A |
Der bedar nuvvu e badlo saduvukunnavo kusantha seppu.. royyalodi nenu naaku boddudu pudithe ada sadivistha.. simpi sata sethunnav.. Congress ki yemudu.. TDP ki mogudu --- Chiru | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1098 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
antha okka punthaga...... "A probing eye searches for a glimpse of you amidst the ravaged droplets of the eye lashed dew fleeting memories and scathing mirages anew another moment of death painted in an unknown hue scary darkness and deafening silence, it ensues as infinite tracts of gloom outstretching the heavenly azure are thrusted into this puny heart writhing in pain, it has to endure A wanderlust tear leaves a wet trial as the soul throbs with out a clue Dark and desolate heavens veiled behind the morning blue busy in their eternal trance as my endless pain, it grew unheeding masters of earth make them hear loud and true Death is the only boon that I need for this life with out you" | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1097 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
last stanza marichanu.....meeru mee tavikalu post cheyyandi...btw.... Dark and desolate heavens veiled behind the morning blue busy in their eternal trance as my endless pain, it grew unheeding masters of earth make them hear loud and true Death is the only boon that I need for this life with out you | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1094 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
in its search for you...in its eternal search for you.... | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1093 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
A probing eye searches for a glimpse of you amidst the ravaged droplets of the eye lashed dew fleeting memories and scathing mirages anew another moment of death painted in an unknown hue scary darkness and deafening silence, it ensues as infinite tracts of gloom outstretching the heavenly azure are thrusted into this puny heart writhing in pain, it has to endure A wanderlust tear leaves a wet trial as the soul throbs with out a clue | ||
| Der_schuler Comedian Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 1092 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 216.48.29.162 Rating: N/A |
meeru mee tavikalu pettandi....ninnati gayala punyama ani indake rasanu....... |
