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Simhadri
Side Hero Username: Simhadri
Post Number: 2465 Registered: 04-2009 Posted From: 74.232.109.254
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, June 06, 2009 - 08:16 am: |
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Kindal:s annai naak kofy kotte alavaatu ledi
good work annai... Ntr_Fan - pandu Simhadri - Laddu |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1155 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.204.12
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, June 06, 2009 - 02:08 am: |
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Simhadri:ee lines bagunnayi..own creation aa annai
s annai naak kofy kotte alavaatu ledi  |
   
Simhadri
Side Hero Username: Simhadri
Post Number: 2452 Registered: 04-2009 Posted From: 74.232.109.254
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 07:05 pm: |
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Kindal:Be it Fever or problem with Lever. gonna wait for u ever will give U up never. thinking about u dear will die here
ee lines bagunnayi..own creation aa annai.. Ntr_Fan - pandu Simhadri - Laddu |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1154 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 05:52 pm: |
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nachaka potey enduku nacha ledu ani seppandi, ee single stars endi  |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1153 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:58 pm: |
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Simhadri:mee kamedy tagaleyya....b/w adi real story annattu gurtu..plz no more deaths...
sorry bro |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1152 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:55 pm: |
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Humpty_dumpty:baabu ee nithya, nithya blackhole laaga undhi...andaru dhaam...roju ko rachayatha wachi okarni sampesthunaaru...anyways good attempt...konni places lo dialog/narration telugu to english translation undhi avoid seyyandi...
edo oka try sesa, vl try to avoid such translation I messed up with the last sentence, where i made this mistake Of course Sid was waiting for her not from here but from San Fransisco instead I shld hav used Of course Sid was watching her not from here but from San Fransisco nxt time improve avutaa sorry if I spoiled Platy's story thx 4 feedback |
   
Simhadri
Side Hero Username: Simhadri
Post Number: 2450 Registered: 04-2009 Posted From: 74.232.109.254
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:26 pm: |
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Kindal:
mee kamedy tagaleyya....b/w adi real story annattu gurtu..plz no more deaths... Ntr_Fan - pandu Simhadri - Laddu |
   
Humpty_dumpty
Comedian Username: Humpty_dumpty
Post Number: 1593 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:16 pm: |
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Kindal:
baabu ee nithya, nithya blackhole laaga undhi...andaru dhaam...roju ko rachayatha wachi okarni sampesthunaaru...anyways good attempt...konni places lo dialog/narration telugu to english translation undhi avoid seyyandi... Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1151 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:12 pm: |
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Humpty_dumpty:this is the most confusing part...ninna story lo sid is the second guy right and there was some1 else whom she was waiting for to call her ( that person was in SFO)...????????
Thats not Waiting, but Watching Having read Platy's story I understood that Prakas is the other guy, who is no more in the world, but Nithya thinks hez in SFO. I mentioned that SId is travelling with a speed of 140Kmph & finally watching her from SFO, Sid too is no more due to accident. I didnt mention that |
   
Humpty_dumpty
Comedian Username: Humpty_dumpty
Post Number: 1591 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 04:07 pm: |
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Kindal:"Of course Sid was waiting for her not from here but from San Fransisco!!"
this is the most confusing part...ninna story lo sid is the second guy right and there was some1 else whom she was waiting for to call her ( that person was in SFO)...???????? Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1149 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 03:59 pm: |
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Mrhyderabad:story asalu ardham kaaledu mama... Let me read it again...
vaarini  |
   
Mrhyderabad
Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad
Post Number: 1866 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 03:55 pm: |
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Kindal:
story asalu ardham kaaledu mama... Let me read it again... Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1148 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 03:48 pm: |
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Kindal:"Of course Sid was waiting for her not from here but from San Fransisco!!"
small correction, its Watching but not waiting plz comments plz  |
   
Kindal
Comedian Username: Kindal
Post Number: 1147 Registered: 09-2007 Posted From: 122.164.172.71
Rating:  Votes: 3 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, June 05, 2009 - 03:40 pm: |
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Next day, Sid dropped few flowers at Nithya's desk. He went looking for her round the campus. He is helpless but imagine her presence. He roamed again & again to figure out dat she hasn't come to the office that night. Next evening, when Nitya opened her inbox, the first mail she saw was of Sid's Thanks for not coming to office, I made two friends who'd never leave me. Guess who?? Caugh & Cold. She smiled to herself. Talking to herself, she headed to the boring cafe where. No sooner did she reach the cafe she looked at the board where she saw something startling than routine Masala Dosa & Chiken Biryani Be it Fever or problem with Lever. gonna wait for u ever will give U up never. thinking about u dear will die here "It's Sid" she shouted. "yeah, it's me, yeah yeah yeah " Sid jumped from no where with enthusiasm. Nithya : "Dont think that ur stealing me, no idiot in this world would have written something so stupid as you" Sid : "My stupidity preceedes me, Waateva, shall v hav coffee together" Nithya : Again wih u??????? "Tell me dear, I know ur waiting there........" was the ring tone. Her face glowed brighter than Sun on Mid-day summer. Is it her much anticipated call from San Fransisco? Nahh, it's her roomie Kalpana, who does nothing but buzzing Nithya all the time. Kalpana : "Youuuuu, forgot to give our room keyss to the watchman" Nithya : Damn, am sorry baby, I will send those keys to you in an hour. I promise. [Nithya is known to keep her promise] She thot of taking another leave, but in no mood to bear the nonsense of her lovely friend Kalpana. Had Sid not been there, she'd hav shouted, God help me out. She looked at Sid, Nithya : "Herez da deal, U asked me to show u a girl, she is desperately waiting for u at my apartment, she is more beautiful than me & if she likes u, its a match to the perfection, go try ur luck. Here are the keys" Sid : "I don want her steal me from u, am not going any where" Nithya : "herez da deal, go give her the keys, i'll pay for our coffee" Sid felt as if he got wings, he was flying in dreams here & there, he never thot Nithya would call him for coffe by herself. In an excitement to hav coffe wit her, he snatched keys from her, Sid : "be ready in cafe by half an hour, i will be there" Nithya : "But do u know where I live?" Sid : "In my heart" [this angered Nithya & her facial expressions changed] Sid : "In anger, looks no gal in this world so beautiful as u" [this did nothing but anger her more & he left] He was on high, felt as if entire world is appriciating his victory. He never had a good chance to flirt with Nithya, he got a chance to see her sipping coffe with her beautiful lips. [Sid knows where Nithya lives as he himself forgot how many times he followed Nithya to herr apartment, without getting caught atleast once] He took his Yamaha FZ & drove as fast as he could. In 15 mins he reached the apartment & handed over the Keys to the watchman. [In next 5 mins, Nithya got msg that kalpana received keys from Sid] "Driving at 140Kmph, This is my day to remember, God thank you so much" Nithya went to cafe after 5 mins, prepared herself not to fall in any traps of Sid & promise him to go out with him next time. She planned how to take the chat with him & fool him at every opportunity. Thinking about Sid, she waited for 30 mins. She waited for Sid for 30 more mins,She worried for a moment & thot this might be trick of Sid. "He might be enjoying my waiting for him" She left to the office. "Of course Sid was waiting for her not from here but from San Fransisco!!" This is my sequel to Platy's Single Episode Story NIGHT SHIFT |