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     Subzero Comedian Username: Subzero Post Number: 1604 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 59.93.87.191 Rating: N/A |
Good  సర్వ దేవాత్మకో హ్యేస తేజస్వీ రశ్మీభావనాః ఎస దేవాసుర గణమ్ లోకాం పాతి గభాస్తీభీః | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 33 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.103.215 Rating: N/A |
yes | ||
| Subzero Comedian Username: Subzero Post Number: 1590 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 59.93.72.17 Rating: N/A |
Desparado, r u from IBDB with the same id ? plz anwer if pozible సర్వ దేవాత్మకో హ్యేస తేజస్వీ రశ్మీభావనాః ఎస దేవాసుర గణమ్ లోకాం పాతి గభాస్తీభీః | ||
| Anand_n Side Hero Username: Anand_n Post Number: 3676 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 68.206.110.236 Rating: N/A |
Good narration as usual  content idivaraku chadivanu both - your twist and the one King posted...
Your twist is more unpredictable and darker.. Still decimates the hero's character for the reader - but defies the fairytale ending of good always wins in the end... aa chal ke tujhe main leke chalu ik aise gagan ke tale jahan gam bhi na ho, aansoo bhi na ho,bas pyaar hi pyaar pale | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 31 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.103.215 Rating: N/A |
mr hyd bro, aa statement mimmalni uddesinchi kaadu naa version of climax gurinchi | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1201 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 76.124.219.90 Rating: N/A |
 Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 30 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.103.215 Rating: N/A |
hero ki vadu manchi vadu ayithe bagundu ani undi...prekshakulaki hero manchi vadu ayithe bagundu ani undi...kani story writer ki twist la pichi undi kada mama | ||
| Dlm Side Hero Username: Dlm Post Number: 9349 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 98.180.198.232 Rating: N/A |
emi gattekaadu mama? athanu ala think chesthe, inka athanu cheppe preaches ki meaning emundi? CBN is History - YSR is Present - Chiru is Future | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 29 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.103.215 Rating: N/A |
konni sarlu chadasthalu kuda manalni gattekkisthayi | ||
| Dlm Side Hero Username: Dlm Post Number: 9346 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 98.180.198.232 Rating: N/A |
hmmm... so what is the moral of this ending?
Did he stop wrinting articles after this incident? meeru, vivek feelings kooda add chesi vunte bavundedhi... prapancham loni manchi vallalo, 99% mandi tappu chese avakasam raka manchi vallaga migilipotharu anta... CBN is History - YSR is Present - Chiru is Future | ||
| Subzero Comedian Username: Subzero Post Number: 1587 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 59.93.78.197 Rating: N/A |
oh I see సర్వ దేవాత్మకో హ్యేస తేజస్వీ రశ్మీభావనాః ఎస దేవాసుర గణమ్ లోకాం పాతి గభాస్తీభీః | ||
| Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 27 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 76.4.103.215 Rating: N/A |
Nice one!! I just thought there could also be a different climax... short ga katte kotte theche type lo narrate chestha mana story hero vivek ki manchi writing skills tho patu verri chadastham kuda untundi...he always like to make sure and double check...ayana chadasthaniki konni udaharanalu....intlo nunchi bayataki veletappudu lights anni off unnaya leda ani 2,3 times check cheyyatam...car ekkadina park chesthe car lock chesada leda ani check cheyyatam....etc etc now scene at guest house....call girl comes in a very provoking and revealing attire(who ofcourse is a stunning beauty)....after couple of vodka shots, being an ardant fan of vivek she wants to offer herself to vivek..she explains to vivek that it will be between them and will be one night stand scene cut chesthe she is waiting for him in the first floor bed room...mana vadu aa tempting offer ki tension loki vachesthadu... baaga think chesi farmhouse bayatiki vachesthadu..... There he will see a crowd outside his house....evaraa ani chusthe they are none but his mom and swetha's parents...they tell him that it is swetha who came up with this idea to test his character!!!!!all she just wanted to see was, he preaches what he practices!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!while everybody is proud of vivek, vivek thinks..oh my gosh!! my chadastham saved me today...had I not come out to check my car lights before going upstairs........ | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1200 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 76.124.219.90 Rating: N/A |
mikkymouse, Anduke starting lo "Inspired" ani note petta. Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Ferrari Side Hero Username: Ferrari Post Number: 3609 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 90.218.135.77 Rating: N/A |
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| Mikkymouse Junior Artist Username: Mikkymouse Post Number: 574 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 216.111.115.2 Rating: N/A |
My Hydrabad, Edhi Okappudu Gemini lo, Eemadyane Maa Tv lo vachina Edhi Nijam ane serial lo one of the episode. Ee edhi nijam serial ki award kooda vachindhi. Okko episode ki okka kadha. Ee episode lo writer ga sameer act chesadu. Nuvvu serial type lo chebuthunnavu anukunna kaanee serial ne marala chebuthavu anukoledhu. | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 740 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
anukunna maradali pilla edo set chesthaadi ani...konni writer liberties unna baanay end chesaav annai...next time soap opera kakunda inko theme try seyyi...u can do it... Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| King Junior Artist Username: King Post Number: 654 Registered: 08-2008 Posted From: 148.107.1.20 Rating: N/A |
baga vundi ending | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1199 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
"Vivek, Give me a minute. I will be with you" said Dimple picking up her cell phone from handbag. "Mom, I WON. Please bring the car back. BAVA is no different then any other guy. His preachings are only confined to his books. That's why i wanted to test him when all of you guys were speaking high about him. If i lost the best today, i thought of proposing to him today. But... huh... MEN will never change" Vivek stood there in disbelief. Vodka affect has suddenly vanished. Swetha left the house with a smile leaving Vivek stunned. Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| King Junior Artist Username: King Post Number: 653 Registered: 08-2008 Posted From: 148.107.1.20 Rating: N/A |
mr hyd, correct ga cheppana story ni? | ||
| King Junior Artist Username: King Post Number: 652 Registered: 08-2008 Posted From: 148.107.1.20 Rating: N/A |
recognizes him as vivek aka moder viresalingam | ||
| King Junior Artist Username: King Post Number: 651 Registered: 08-2008 Posted From: 148.107.1.20 Rating: N/A |
Kuncham short ga chebuthanu story ni as I am not good at screen play Vivek, ki suddenga ee callgirl kadhane novel ga enduku rayakudadu ani alochana vasthundi.. Call girl aslo recognizes him later as moder viresalingam He asks that call girl if he can interview her wile waiting for the mechanic and she agrees for the interview but says that she does not provide any free service. So vivek agrees to pay for her time ( eg: for night or for eight hours). Aa call girl motham thana kashtalu , ee profession loki endhuku vachindi cheputhundi in around 7 hours. But before making the payment vivek thinks that there is one more hour left over and then he uses that hour by sleeping with her. Aa call girl vellipoyetappudu cheputhundi you are not fit for all the birudulu, you are also like all men. You just do all this writing for fame and nothing else. If this is not the story then I am sorry and you continue with your. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1198 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
Vivek's shock doubled now. He didn't know how to continue the conversation after that. He was not prepared to for this kind of situation. "My name is Dimple. I live in the city" she broke the silence first. "I am Vivek" he answered in short. "I have seen you somewhere. Are you the same Vivek who writes books?" "Yeah" "You should try a book on the lives of Call Girls also" she teased him. "I write books and women's rights and their struggles in today's world" "Who said our life is a bed of roses?" Vivek didn't answer. He turned to watch TV. From the moment she said "I am a call girl" his mind was doing lot of multi-threaded processing. His vodka slowly trying to show its affect. Romantic movie on the TV was acting like a catalyst. He decides to leave the room as he it is becoming difficult for him to sit there. "Dimple, you can use the bedroom in the first floor. I will wake you up when the mechanic comes in. I will go to sleep now" and he walked in to his bedroom without waiting for her answer. She nodded silently. Vivek came out after sometime as couldn't sleep in his room. Dimple was not there. His feet automatically turned towards stairs to 1st floor. She didn't close the door. He walked inside the room. She smiled at him teasingly. "Can i ask you something?" "Sure, go ahead" He didn't know how to ask. Guessing his hesitance, she came near to him. Vivek murmered something in low voice her ear. Dimple suddenly started laughing... loudly and hysterically Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| King Junior Artist Username: King Post Number: 650 Registered: 08-2008 Posted From: 148.107.1.20 Rating: N/A |
thammudu.. ikkada nunchi nenu cheputha ..naaku ee story thelusu | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 734 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
kevvv...audience naadi balay padathaav annai...i know where u r trying to lead us...amma... Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1197 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
 Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1196 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
He slowly opened the door. He was surprised at the visitor. A beautiful young woman was standing there fully drenched in water. She must be in her late 20's he thought. She was shivering due to soaked clothes. She must be a hot model he thought looking at her figure. But "kandukuri veeresam" in him just woke up right in time. "Yes, how may i help you?" asked Vivek politely. "Sir, Sorry for disturbing you at this late hour. My car broke down on the road. And i couldn't find any one around the place except your house" "No problem, please come in" invited Vivek. "Are there any mechanics around here?" "Not really. But i can call for someone. They may not come here till morning" "Ok, please check if they can make it now" "Sure. Meanwhile, please take this towel and use the bathroom on the first floor" She went inside and came back in 15 mins. Vivek said "Mechanic said, he can only make it by 6 AM" "Ohh... damn... I am not sure what to do now" "If you don't have any problem, you can stay here" "Do you need some hot coffee?" offered vivek. "Actually, Vodka is just fine if you don't mind" Vivek was surprised with the response. She fixed her a glass and they both sat down in living room. "What were you doing in this area at this hour?" asked Vivek. "I am a call girl. I was visiting a client nearby" Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Musicfan Junior Artist Username: Musicfan Post Number: 79 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 136.2.1.153 Rating: N/A |
 ippudu alochinchi writing emo ee serial,, cut and paste kadanukunta | ||
| Sirivennela Junior Artist Username: Sirivennela Post Number: 120 Registered: 12-2008 Posted From: 68.45.79.241 Rating: N/A |
** He settled in a couch and switched on TV. Weatherman was saying severe thunder storms are expected in next 48 hours....** ee line chusaka anipinchindi..oo varsham kurisina ratri type lo ...farm house lo tala dachukovadaniki oka ammayi vastademoo ani...  next part..pls.. | ||
| Mikkymouse Junior Artist Username: Mikkymouse Post Number: 569 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 216.111.115.2 Rating: N/A |
Short story ani cheppi serial tho champuthunnavu. Finish it. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1195 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
He slowly started sipping his Vodka while watching TV. Outside small showers turned in to stead rain. He was flipping though the channels but couldn't find any interesting programs. It is truly a Idiot box he thought. He was about to switch off the TV when he found a vcd on top of dvd player. Farmhouse caretakers must have left it there he thought. It didn't have any name on it... may be a pirated one he thought. He wanted to try it. It turned out to be some steamy romantic movie. He started watching it while the rain outside turned into a severe downpour. Knock...Knock... someone knocked on the door... he looked at wall clock. It was almost 12'o clock. He was puzzled about who could that be? Is it safe to open the door at this time? His farmhouse was in the middle of no where. knock...knock..knock... again.. He got up to open the door. Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Kings Junior Artist Username: Kings Post Number: 126 Registered: 04-2008 Posted From: 167.154.37.207 Rating: N/A |
Mrhyderabad MAMA go ahead....continue the story | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1194 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
"Bava, Congrats on your new book. I heard about y'day award function as well" "Thank you. When r u coming to india?" "Probably next year. I will be done with my PhD by then" He spoke with her for 5 mins and left for the meeting @ womens club to give a guest lecture there. On the same day evening, while coming home Vivek bought few travel needs and few bottles of Vodka. He was planning to go spend a week in his farm house to think about a new book. "Mom, Tomorrow i will be leaving for farmhouse for about a week" "Why do you go there every now and then?" "I need some privacy and lonely time to think about new book" "Who is disturbing you at home here?" "You will not understand mom. I will be back in a week. Call me on my cell phone if there is any emergency" Next day evening he left to farm house which is 100 KMs from Hyderabad. Farmhouse caretakers, Venkayya & Laxmi cleaned the house and welcomed him. They are excited because he will usually ask them to take leave for a week when he is there. They even packed their bags. As expected, he asked them to take off as soon as he came in. He settled in a couch and switched on TV. Weatherman was saying severe thunder storms are expected in next 48 hours. Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 731 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
sankalo pilla( maradalu) kosam oorlo vethikinatta... continue continue Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1193 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
"How many days will you live like "pelli kaani prasad" type?" asked his mom jokingly. "Mom, looks like you are watching too many movies these days" "Don't change the topic" "OK, i have told you many times that, i am yet to find the women of my choice and taste" "Em qualities kaavali enti?" using Mahesh's pokiri dialogue. "You are a complete movie buff... anyway, i don't have any high standards. I am just looking for some basic qualities. And i don't like marrying someone by looking at their pictures". "Anyway, i am tired for today. I feeling sleepy. Good night mom" "OK, we will talk tomorrow then" "good night mom" Next day morning, Vivek's mom has kept 5-6 letters on breakfast table. They came from his fans. Vivek rarely goes through them. "Vivek, look how many girls/women love you. These are all love letters to you. They are ready to marry you if you agree" "Mom, i can't just marry them because they love me. When i find the right girl of my taste i will marry immediately" Vivek was ready to leave the house when he got a phone call. It was from his book publishing company asking about his next book. "I haven't thought about it yet. I will let you know when i have a subject" And when he almost got in to the car, his mom came outside with a cordless phone and said, "Vivek call for you" "Please take the message and tell them i will return the call later" "Nee maradalu Swetha ra from USA" Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Musicfan Junior Artist Username: Musicfan Post Number: 73 Registered: 03-2009 Posted From: 136.2.1.153 Rating: N/A |
story read at one go will be interesting,, ila parts parts gantaki veste serial avutundi not a short story.. | ||
| Joe Junior Artist Username: Joe Post Number: 429 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 69.248.26.25 Rating: N/A |
tharvatha ??? Attitude's contagious and mine's worth catching. | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 724 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
continue bro... Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| Ferrari Side Hero Username: Ferrari Post Number: 3591 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 90.218.135.77 Rating: N/A |
same scene fashion lo untundhi...last ki vadu gay ani telustadhi.. ..kompadeesi e story lo alantivi levu kadha | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1192 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
By the time Vivek reached home, it was 11 PM. His mom was waiting for him. She didn't go to the function as she got bored of such functions. "Vivek, go and get fresh. I will arrange dinner on the table" "Did you finish dinner mom?" asked Vivek. "Not yet.. i was watching TV and didn't realize the time. Come fast.. we both will have together" "How many times should i tell you to not wait for me? Just give me 10 mins. I will be ready" She asked him about the function while having dinner. he explained briefly. Her mom brought up the same old topic again. "You have so many fans in women, why can't you find ONE for you?" "Mom, i have told you many times. Why do you keep bringing this topic every now and then?" "Do you realize you are already in mid-30s?" "So what mom?" "I want to see you getting married and happily living with your family" "I am happy now mom". Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 719 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
waiting for the rest Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| Mallik Side Hero Username: Mallik Post Number: 4299 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 162.116.29.69 Rating: N/A |
Its Vivekadhara not andhra.. In this db, there's always someone watching you!!  | ||
| Bhikhu Side Hero Username: Bhikhu Post Number: 2366 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 148.129.129.155 Rating: N/A |
Hyd tamud settu kinda saduvu sektlo ippa sara point story lo ettamani request sestunna | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1191 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
Anand ji, Please note that this story is not against anyone (Not even Vivekandhra ID) Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1190 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
(It is a very very short inspired story) Time: 6 PM on Saturday evening Location: Ravindra Bharathi, Hyderabad Function: Sanmaanam for Vivek Auditorium is fully packed with crowds. Most of them are women. Organizors are surprised to see such a huge turnout for this kind of program. They know that Vivek had lot of following in women but didn't expect such a huge response. Sharmila Devi, Womend Club President, Guest speaker for the function: It is an honor for me to speak on this occasion. Just like all of you, i am also a great fan of Vivek. He is a great writer. He has been fighting against denigration of women for past 10 years through his writings. He is our modern Kandukuri Veeresalingam fighting for Women's emancipation. His latest book Vivekandhra talks about today's women's problems. Now, I humbly request Mr.Vivek to come on to the dias and speak few words. Thunderous applause. Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... | ||
| Humpty_dumpty Junior Artist Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 718 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
lets go dude...polls bore dobbs, next phase waraku chiraaku... Liberty is too great a virtue to be buried in books | ||
| Redplanet Side Hero Username: Redplanet Post Number: 3318 Registered: 05-2008 Posted From: 24.91.69.137 Rating: N/A |
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| Joe Junior Artist Username: Joe Post Number: 428 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 69.248.26.25 Rating: N/A |
I am interested. Please poast cheyandi oka story Attitude's contagious and mine's worth catching. | ||
| Mrhyderabad Comedian Username: Mrhyderabad Post Number: 1189 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.118 Rating: N/A |
Looks like everyone is busy with analyzing 1st phase polls. Pedda pedda producers kuda bhaya padataaru ee time lo movie release ki...  Shall we postpone the release?  Perception is immune to Intellectual Correction ... |
