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     Unorthodox Comedian Username: Unorthodox Post Number: 1348 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 151.151.21.106 Rating: N/A |
Paul Schrader ani oka writer unde vaadu...ataniki chaalaa rojulu job ledu...lonely gaa baaga feel ayyaadu...ataniki inko alavaatu entante puurtigaa burralo kadha tayaarayina tarvaata kaanee paper meeda pettadu...daani valla ekkado sunyam loki chuustuu alochistuu marinta ontarigaa ayipoyaadu... oka rakangaa cheppaalante Taxi Driver kadha tappula tadaka, plot parangaa...oka character view point vuntadi ante...Paul Schrader lonely gaa unde character gurinchi alochistante aa character ni Taxi Driver cheste elaa vuntadi ane oka alochana vachchindi....daani screen writing part e Taxi Driver....cinemaa lo aa taxi driver pere Travis Bickle ika Pual Schrader, De Niro, Scorcesse laki baagaa perochchondi...oka American president hatya(regan anukuntaa) jariginappudu konta mandi Taxi Drivers ni interrogate chesaarante....ee movie affect enta undo cheppochchu... Mean Streets, the movie I like most in Scorcesse Deniro combo, came before this and it heralded a new era... Cinema for the larger audiences can not be poetic--Andrei Tarkovysky | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8520 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: N/A |
raasinappudu post chesthunna...rather DB ki vacchinappudu raasthunna....its for feature film....dialogues will be improvised later.... | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8519 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: N/A |
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| Unorthodox Comedian Username: Unorthodox Post Number: 1347 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 151.151.21.106 Rating: N/A |
mottam already undaa...leka raasinappudu post chestunnaavaa...idi nuvvu raastandi, feature kaa short kaa? Cinema for the larger audiences can not be poetic--Andrei Tarkovysky | ||
| Dhaarkaar Side Hero Username: Dhaarkaar Post Number: 3396 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 198.204.133.208 Rating: N/A |
Elca mama..idhi nee script aaa..? koncham inpsiration meedha lite veyyi | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8518 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: N/A |
Chapter 2)Inferno of hate...When Satan Smiled on Hijrat The death of Hiran becomes a sensation and the manner he got killed becomes a legend. The RADICAL Islamic talib-e-ilm community starts to consider the one who killed Hiran as their Hero.Its leader Abdul Kareem declares him as a FARISHTA.A guardian for Muslims. Shot shifts to Viveks office.Interior.Viveks looking into some paper work when he is disturbed with a knock on his door. He looks up and was pleased to find MEERA.She is the one he needs at this time. She has a unique knack of reading the situation and sensing the next moves of the criminals aptly. They quickly go through the case details and she seems satisfied with the information she got and she asks for the Audio cassette. Vivek Provides her the cassette and she starts listening to it Tape on ......silence for a few moments .... then the voice over starts...A male voice...the voice is a bit feeble but its clear....and authoritative... "When one starts to think he is god's defender he tends to take religion seriously..... The ferocity of which will lead to taking air planes right into the twin towers or Burning scientists and philosophers alive for questioning the faith and and Even to the extent of raping.... I mean raping a MOM and her CHILD at the same time .....A MOM and a CHILD .....The most heinous act a human can commit....(pauses).... U DO IT....U LOSE IT... (silence for a while and voice starts again) When I was a kid I used to see these worms in Cotton fields Boll worms and Cotton worms. Even they have territorial issues. So when a pesticide is sprayed on a Cotton worm Boll worms feel happy that the medicine got rid of cotton worms ...(pauses)....they don't realize that they too belong to a family of pests and it's just a matter of time the pesticide gets em ....... just a matter of time ....... matter of time" Tape is off Meera glances at Vivek Vivek explains dat Hiran lead that infamous mob which did all those nasty things during those riots. He was personally present when the mob raided that wealthy muslim family which was sheltering people from slums and that heinous RAPE mentioned in the tape happened in his supervision. Vivek____Can you tell me anything more from the tape Meera____He is in pain ..... the pauses.... the heavy breathes.... and the repetition of words they tell me all is not well and Vivek__________And??? Meera ______HE IS NOT TARGETTING ONLY ONE SIDE.... (rahman BG starts to build the momentum) At the same time a member of Vivek knocks on the door and says "WE GOT ONE MORE"........ Shot shifts to a Junk Yard.Full of old auto mobiles. Its huge and in one corner There is a small ofice kinda construction.Outside of this room is an old Ambassador car.A LONG TUBE is fixed to the Silencer of that car.Viveks team enters that room and they find ABDUL KAREEM tied to a chair with a breathing mask fitted tightly to his mouth and nose.ONE END OF THE TUBE CONNECTING THE SIELNCER OF THE CAR ID FIXED TO HIS BREATHING MASK.THE CAR IS STILL RUNNING. ABDUL KAREEM WAS SMOTHERED WITH THE SMOKE COMING OUT OF THE CAR AND THE HYDRO CARBONS DID THEIR JOB.HE IS DEAD.HIS FACE TURNED BACK WITH THE HEAT. Vivek and Meera looks at eachother and quickly go towards the car anticipating another tape.They look into the car and they dont find anything.Then Vivek presses the eject button on the car tape and THEY FIND THE ONE THEY ARE LOOKIN FOR..... (CHapter 2 continues...)} | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8503 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: N/A |
objective is to shock the living daylights of audience....but the violence nothing compared to what we see in daily life.... | ||
| Jambalahaart_raja Junior Artist Username: Jambalahaart_raja Post Number: 160 Registered: 07-2008 Posted From: 146.184.0.114 Rating: N/A |
start baane undi but..... konchem ilaane anipisthondi.....  awaiting further more chapters. nee flow lo nuvvu continue avvu. atleast lateral narrations levu.....antha varaku happies. | ||
| Siloan Side Hero Username: Siloan Post Number: 4621 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 155.201.35.54 Rating: N/A |
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| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8502 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: |
All characters and incidents in this picture are fictional This is a work of fiction and any resemblance between the characters and persons living or dead is purely coincidental Movie Starts CCDB Movies EL Presents "True religion is real living living with all one's soul, with all one's goodness and righteousness" Albert Einstein Rahman BG starts.... (The phrases on the screen gets superimposed by video clips of religious violence one by one and suddenly the screen gets chaotic...the haunting BG score reaches the pinnacle and the screen goes black) DHOGRA (titles starts to roll and as they reach the end music subsides...silent prevails) Chapter1____ Corpse without a Phallus Early morning....Exterior gate of a MLAs House.The name board says Hiran Chawda.A house maid appears at the gate ,wishes the guard and comes through the gate and keeps walking to the main house. She collects the Milk packets and paper at the door and she goes into the main house. She goes to the kitchen and makes koffee.She puts the koffee cup in a saucer holds the Newspaper in another hand and walks towards the main bed room. She is surprised to see the door slightly open, thinking her master might have already awake she pushes the door gently. The camera quickly zooms onto the person in bed. HE IS NAKED... HE IS TIED TO THE BED FACE UP...HIS PENIS IS CHOPPED OFF...THE BLOOD IS STILL OOZING FROM THE AMPUTATED PLACE...HIS MOUTH IS PLASTERED...HE IS BREATHING HEAVILY AND QUICKLY AND WHEN WE SEE HIS FACE HE TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND HE STOPS...THAT WAS HIS LAST...HIS EYES OPEN TELLING A TALE OF HORROR AND TORTURE HE HAS SEEN DAT NIGHT... The servant maid lets a huge cry and the shot cuts to news channels conveying the news to the viewers..." MLA HIRAN found dead...message sent to his family who r in vacation in london...blah blah blah'.... with shots of police, paramedics and the supporters at the MLA residencE..... At the bed room entrance two police folks gossiping in low tones and giggling... Police1"Evaro jealous lover kosesinattu undhi" Police2 "potha potha happy ga poyadu" Then enters homicide Detective Vivek....the policemen salutes him and he asks ..."anyone touched anything?" the policemen say "Yes sir...The paramedics checked to see if he is alive...except them nobody has entered into the bed room "Vivek enters into the bed room with his teAM...he seen lots of gruesome scenes but this one makes him to look away for a while..by far this is the most horrible spectacle for him...his senior most team member covers his mouth and coughs...first time vivek has seen him like dat...Vivek starts to poke around the room. The bed is puddle of blood. He also observes blood on the ceiling too. There seems to be no sign of struggle in the room. Except the blood everything else is in its place. Only the blood is everywhere..sudden ga one of da team members says "Sir...look at this" Vivek looks at him...That guy is holding a PENIS ENLARGER PUMP....Vivek changes his face to show disgust and utters "SICK" Saying this he turns and something catches his attention on the TV...there is an idol on TV with its palms opened as an offerinG...on the palms he sees what seems to be an audio cassette wounded in a paper...He opens the paper and it says "LISTEN to me" Shot cuts to TV screens....A news reader giving updates on the death of MLA... "MLA Hirans death is now confirmed to be a MURDER...This act has added a lot of importance as Hiran is a suspect in the attack of kurivilla vard during DHOGRA riots...it left 600 people dead most of the woman raped and burnt alive...In the mean while CM mokshendra released a statement on his close aides death" CM___"Hiran was a patriot...A true Hindu...Whoever responsible for this cowardly act will be brought to justice...US HAREEN SAAMP KO HUM CHODHENGEY NAHIN" Shot cuts to Viveks office...interior he is listening to audio tape in head phones....he stops it midway ... takes the receiver quickly dials a number and says "Sir this is Vivek.Yes sir we are making progress the post mortem reports are coming today. Iam afraid I need MEERA on this case.I cant explain now.OK thank you.Will look forward to meet her tomorrow" He hangs up and his aide knocks on the door with a file It's the post mortem results. Aide is accompanied by the doctor and they three sit together. Doctor____A kitchen knife was used to cut the organ. The knife was selected to have sharp teeth as the pain induced will be more.The Organ was erect when it was chopped.thats why so much blood.It was forced with the PENIS ENLARGING PUMP.When its erect the blood flow will be high and then it stays there.So when its chopped the blood loss will be high intitally.The bleeding will be quick and the pain is also severe. Vivek_____So he wanted to make it a gory scene.dats why he took so much pain to carry out this. Meticulous Doctor____yes chaala patience tho carry chesadu Vivek_____Do U have anything else? Doctor___yes......(he pauses) we found not one but two different blood groups in the scene Vivek eyes widens listening to this (End of first chapter) | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8498 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: N/A |
Chapter 1)Corpse Minus Phallus Chapter 2)Inferno of hate...When Satan Smiled on Hijrat Chapter 3)Wounded Warrior Chapter 4)Disloyal Pit bulls Chapter 5)Half Burnt Messiah Chapter 6)The meet Chapter 7)The Spectacular Sling Shot | ||
| Elcaminocapastrino Side Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 8497 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 12.38.242.98 Rating: |
What if Travis Bickle of Taxi driver is from a 3rd world country???How will he react to communal tensions and the ugly leaders who are putting the life of innocent civilians at risk.Who will he go after?Who does he consider the scum of the earth here? Dhogra is born from that thought....Dhogra doesnt take any sides ,its just a reaction from our Hero (Rahul) to what he sees around him...how he analyses it and how he responses to it Dhogra is narrated as chapters inspired by our GURU Quentin.... Main Characters Rahul___PHD pursuer in Quant/Nano Physics...is very knowledgeable and interested in the concepts of meta physics,philosophy of mind.diagnosed with lung cancer and has 6 more months to live...he is the hero.... Meera____28yr old..pschiatrist..working for law enforcement..excellent in reading criminals....untouchable to corruption or greed Vivek _____homicide detective....a big name in solving high profile crimes...untouchable to corruption or greed Mokshendra Sodhi____Chief minister of Hijrat where Dhogra place is situated...A right wing person with fundamentalist approach Mulla Naimuddin____A religious fanatic...uses mosque as a brainwashing clynic for kids to instigate the radical thoughts of religion in young minds.... Hiran Chawda____MLA of Dhogra....a very close aid of CM Mokshendra Sodhi....A bigot and will go to any extent to establish horror during communal tensions abdul kareem_____Head of islamic talib-e-ilm movement for hijrat......has contacts with underworld and helps in the transport of illegal stuff from outside border to bombay via Dhogra.....Along with mulla naimuddin a key memeber in Dhogra to balance the powers of both hindu extremists Satya Narain___Head of Police for Hijrat....a boot licker of Mokshendra Sodhi...will eat grass if he wants him to... |
