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Platypus
Junior Artist Username: Platypus
Post Number: 261 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 122.169.156.3
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, May 08, 2010 - 03:12 am: |
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Cough cough cough... "My dog is playing with him" annadhi porabaatu. I should have written Jimmy there. Corrected now. I guess rest of the comments about the story - inkemi chesthaam? accept chesi - better story raayadaaniki try chesthaam Thanks for the feedback everyone There are 10 types of people in this world. Those who understand binary and those who don't. |
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Cocanada
Moderator Username: Cocanada
Post Number: 20078 Registered: 01-2008
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 02:00 pm: |
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Mrhyderabad:anta simple yet funny gaa
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Mrhyderabad
Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad
Post Number: 5987 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:59 pm: |
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Chuss.. anta simple yet funny gaa story raasthe nachaledu, ardham kaaledu antaaraa? For me, it was excellent.. Typical Platy short story. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you |
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Twitter
Junior Artist Username: Twitter
Post Number: 853 Registered: 10-2009 Posted From: 151.191.175.205
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:39 pm: |
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Mrhyderabad:Mademoiselle
ikkade chala sepu pattindhi naaku btw e mataki aa maate cheppu kovali story chethha la vundhi  |
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Kish
Hero Username: Kish
Post Number: 11707 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 98.215.115.88
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:39 pm: |
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Cinejeevi:
http://www.tollywoodinfo.com/discus/messages/8/106909.html?1 272044597 Direct ga Platy ne prashninchaanu, aayana em chepthaaro chooddhaam!  Life is like a piano, what you get out of it depends on how you play it! |
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Cocanada
Moderator Username: Cocanada
Post Number: 20074 Registered: 01-2008
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:35 pm: |
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Cocanada:telusu lo ide story vini ardham cheskovalani undi
*telugu |
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Cinejeevi
Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi
Post Number: 4864 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 91.103.41.50
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:33 pm: |
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Kish:
aaDuvaari maaTalaku ardhaale vErulE... ani platy kavibhaavam anukuntunna.. Is there any way I can add another single??   My name is NEEL I am not ADMIN |
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Cocanada
Moderator Username: Cocanada
Post Number: 20073 Registered: 01-2008
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:28 pm: |
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Thesaurus ekkuvayindi telusu lo ide story vini ardham cheskovalani undi |
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Kish
Hero Username: Kish
Post Number: 11706 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 98.215.115.88
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:28 pm: |
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Cinejeevi:aa lover gaadu, aa ammai ki chendina kukka ni "kukka" annaaDu. aame ki kopam vachchindi. final gaa kshaminchesindi..
Mari aa ammayi enduku Jimmy ni dog anindi?
Mrhyderabad:the girl picked up the phone and said, "Yes. He's here. My dog is playing with him. I accept his apology."
Idhi kooda N word lagaana? Aa ammayi dog ni dog anocchu kaani thana boyfriend anoddha? Platy annai, okka word tho story antha dilute aipoyindi- she should have said "Jimmy is playing with him"! Life is like a piano, what you get out of it depends on how you play it! |
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Cinejeevi
Side Hero Username: Cinejeevi
Post Number: 4861 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 91.103.41.50
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 01:24 pm: |
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Humpty_dumpty:
ee english literature batch toni ide problem. sootigaa edi chepparu stories lo. aa lover gaadu, aa ammai ki chendina kukka ni "kukka" annaaDu. aame ki kopam vachchindi. final gaa kshaminchesindi.. btw sodi story ki oka single esa    telisETTu cheptE siddhantam, teliyakapOtE vEdaantam
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Mrhyderabad
Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad
Post Number: 5983 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 12:23 pm: |
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Humpty_dumpty: enti pilla kurrod nee kukka anaysindhaa
meeku alaa ardham ayindaa?  If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you |
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Humpty_dumpty
Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty
Post Number: 6841 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14
Rating: N/A Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 12:18 pm: |
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//Then at last, the girl picked up the phone and said, "Yes. He's here. My dog is playing with him. I accept his apology."// // "So you will never call {b Jimmy a dog} again?" She asked with a smile on her face. // enti pilla kurrod nee kukka anaysindhaa |
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Mrhyderabad
Side Hero Username: Mrhyderabad
Post Number: 5981 Registered: 01-2008 Posted From: 167.230.38.120
Rating:  Votes: 6 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, April 23, 2010 - 12:13 pm: |
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Well, a story has to begin somewhere. Some authors choose the birth of the protagonist while some choose a random incident in the protagonist's life. This story begins pretty much like all those stories you have read so far. The random incident in this case is a beautiful young lady seated under a mango tree sporting a serious expression. The cell phone rang. She took one disinterested look at the phone and another at the mangoes hanging off the branches of the tree. She apparently had no plans of answering the call when a stranger barged into the scene with a flower in his hand. "Mademoiselle Nitya. This is for you." He said kneeling in front of the girl. The girl stared at him expressionless. He stared at her completely charged up with a smile pasted all over his body. Quite a few moments had passed by when a dog, which had so far been a mute spectator of a love story in the making sans any trace of romance, suddenly decided that it needed to inject a catalyst into the situation - which otherwise would go on forever or until 2012 - when Mayan calendar would spell doom for the entire world. It barked and charged towards the knelt man. Now, when a man had already knelt before a woman with a rose in one hand stretched like the statue of Liberty, the last thing on his mind would be to handle a barking dog running furiously at him. In fact his poise was so unsuitable for an altercation with the four legged freak that his mind went blank momentarily unable to chalk out an efficient response to this unplanned development. By the time he recovered from the shock and decided to run, it was too late. The beast was all over him. The girl still had a disinterested look on her face. Her mobile kept on ringing. The man kept on fighting with the dog and the dog had a gall of time. Then at last, the girl picked up the phone and said, "Yes. He's here. My dog is playing with him. I accept his apology." The man's face lit up. "Jimmy, come back" she said. The dog jumped off the man's head and waggled its tail. The man stood up, dusted his Armani and smiled at the girl. "So you will never call Jimmy a dog again?" She asked with a smile on her face. The man furiously nodded his head. "Jimmy is a darling. Jimmy is a lovely person. Jimmy has a distinct personality. Jimmy has great teeth. Jimmy has sharp nails" "Enough" she almost shouted, "Let us go. It is getting late." Threegether, Jimmy, the girl and the boy walked into the sunset. The End. If god doesn't like the way I live, let him tell me, not you |