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Humpty_dumpty Side Hero Username: Humpty_dumpty Post Number: 5922 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 38.117.247.14 Rating: N/A |
EK brother..good narration...i liked the climax...narration is good...story starting nunchi there were hints abt subbu's wimpish character...so climax is perfectly justified... same lines lo platy brother wrote a story some time back previously abt a guy who lost out on marrying a girl.. difference aa story lo romance ee story lo rasikatvam ...  | ||
Elcaminocapastrino Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 19407 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 68.117.108.38 Rating: |
awesome ek....depth undhi.....super raasav | ||
Elcaminocapastrino Hero Username: Elcaminocapastrino Post Number: 19398 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 68.117.108.38 Rating: |
ek mottham sadhivey opika ledhu....bottom line ettu ..subbarao shot esada ledha??? will read later to nite... | ||
Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 4743 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 148.159.160.51 Rating: N/A |
sarma...gangadharanni endhuku chapav......nee manasakshi kshobha pettale ninnu....cheppandi sarma garu.....swara samratule....meeku ituvantivi taguna??? | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8335 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Bump for elca nee ke ankitam ee story .. Nidder raka katha raste ... Murder case ettadu.. | ||
Arjun1234 Side Hero Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 2678 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
hmmm Winners never cheat... even in difficult times. | ||
Jalsa Moderator Username: Jalsa Post Number: 11318 Registered: 02-2008 Rating: N/A |
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Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8331 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
 Nidder raka katha raste ... Murder case ettadu.. | ||
Jalsa Moderator Username: Jalsa Post Number: 11316 Registered: 02-2008 Rating: N/A |
E_K will be banned for targetting a DB member. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8328 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
test  Nidder raka katha raste ... Murder case ettadu.. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8327 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
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Iamim Side Hero Username: Iamim Post Number: 3382 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 119.235.54.170 Rating: |
heheehe ee katha nacchina vallandariki ilanti misses ai untai.. nostalgia...  | ||
Kamal Hero Username: Kamal Post Number: 10358 Registered: 08-2009 Posted From: 71.239.184.202 Rating: N/A |
super annai .. chaala baga narrate chesaaru .. 5 stars vesaanu .. Only'truth' (post 58485) - tellalists chesina vaatiki amaayaka muslims ni champadam india lo aacharaam | ||
Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 4666 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 148.159.160.51 Rating: N/A |
Nee pere ga anatha rama sarma...swara samrat......nee deggara apprentice ga cherina gangadharanni endhuku vedinchi sampav??? | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8323 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Evadeedu? | ||
Der_schuler Side Hero Username: Der_schuler Post Number: 4664 Registered: 01-2009 Posted From: 148.159.160.51 Rating: N/A |
Gangadharanni evaru champaru....aa devuda....ee devuda.....cheppu annai.............. Gangadharanni evaru champaru....aa devuda ...ee devuda..... | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8322 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Evariki emi guilty feeling ledu only kurradiki mathram undedi poindi .. It is about a near miss of an extramarital affair anthe .. Moral entante e pani chesina guilty feeling to cheyyakunda full committed ga cheyyali oka vela teda vachina stright apologies and out of it anthe ... | ||
Jalsa Moderator Username: Jalsa Post Number: 11295 Registered: 02-2008 Rating: N/A |
aa climax sentence lo alaa emi cheppaledhu ga mari | ||
Arjun1234 Side Hero Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 2673 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
 ... why adyaksha whyyyWinners never cheat... even in difficult times. | ||
Arjun1234 Side Hero Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 2672 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
emanna jarigi unte undedemo... emi jarugaledu kada Winners never cheat... even in difficult times. | ||
Jalsa Moderator Username: Jalsa Post Number: 11294 Registered: 02-2008 Rating: N/A |
antey aameki emi guilty feeling undadhaa attaa alochichinandhuku? | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8321 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
asala evariki kavalsina climax vallu ichukovachu .. ikkada evari drishti lo vallu safe kabatti manchi ending vachindi anukunna .. Actual climax lo vanaja tana charyalaki meaning viviarinchi unte 20 years ga jarigina nashtanni kurradu tattukoleka gundagi poyyedemo kiki | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8320 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
naaku climax twist ke manchi votes padathayi anukunnanu kiki | ||
Jalsa Moderator Username: Jalsa Post Number: 11293 Registered: 02-2008 Rating: N/A |
climax nachaledhu. narration baundhi. | ||
Arjun1234 Side Hero Username: Arjun1234 Post Number: 2670 Registered: 09-2008 Posted From: 24.6.29.85 Rating: N/A |
Bagundhi annayya ...Winners never cheat... even in difficult times. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8317 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
bump for others ... kashtapadi raste appreciation leka poina review ayina iyyandayya | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8316 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
bump --- elca.. der... mixie and others | ||
Desparado Junior Artist Username: Desparado Post Number: 657 Registered: 02-2009 Posted From: 71.52.0.117 Rating: N/A |
nice write up EK garu SubbaRao nadumu meedha cheyi vesinandukay Miltry lo join iyyadu antey asalu enka bhum chik iyyuntey Gaddar cinemalo Sunny deol laaga motthamu paki ni taggalabette vadu anukunta | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2487 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
I dont agree with the first 2.. sole reason 3rd di.. | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2485 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
adi kooda ardham kaledaa?? Subbarao waste candi.. paisa ki kooda paniki raadu..but adini choosinappudalla ...aaameki failure story yaad kostha vuntadi....aadi valla manssanthi bokka tappa inka emi vundadu... | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8314 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
vanajaki moodu reasons unnayi ippudu 45 yrs & iddaru teenage ammayilu & Subbarao waste candidate | ||
Ferrari Side Hero Username: Ferrari Post Number: 6019 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 90.193.136.226 Rating: |
btw..last lo vanaja aa addresscard endhuku simpi padesindhi...contact lo unte malli edaina varsham kurisina rathri scene jarige chance untundhi ani padesindha | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8313 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Story Elcamino kurradiki ankitam istunna .. asala ninna athani comment about Sekar kammula heroes ee kathaki kasta preranani ichindi kiki.. | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2484 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
nuvvu sachin kalisi ladies andarini gola chesi bayataki pampi..malla naa meeda nindalu esthunnara?? naa fren emi ipoyindooo | ||
Ferrari Side Hero Username: Ferrari Post Number: 6018 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 90.193.136.226 Rating: N/A |
uuth kadha..andhuke ollantha samathkaram...  ...DB lo papalu andharu ni valle jump jilani kottaru ani sachin vuncle seppadu... | ||
Iamim Side Hero Username: Iamim Post Number: 3379 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 119.235.54.170 Rating: N/A |
Story is very realistic.. Life has many such close misses.. due to misunderstandings... | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2483 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
ok gatlane.. janalaki current leni janam.. thrill leni stories nachavu... anduke singles esi vuntaru subba rao ane role chala mandiki ekkado guchukunela chesthadi anukunta | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8311 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
aa madhya kalamlo(1985-1995) ilanti vatikanna ghoramaina kathalaki sarasamaina katha bahumathi ichevaaru . Scenes important kaadu ferari gaaru .. okka scene kosam kooda life nashanam kakunda undatam important | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2482 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
 neeku ollantha ***** ee BTW...enti DB lo papalu evvaru lenattu vunnaru?? | ||
Ferrari Side Hero Username: Ferrari Post Number: 6017 Registered: 10-2008 Posted From: 90.193.136.226 Rating: N/A |
expect chesina scene raledhu ani esaru anukunta... ...fyi nenu single veyaledhu...scene untey 5 esey vadini... | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8309 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
evereha singles esindi? katha ayipoindi anaa? climax nachaleda? | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8308 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
mana storylo rendu chars ee so veella vishyamlo dharmama 4 padala meeda nadavaka poina veella vall almost andaru benefit ayyaru okka hero tappa anthe .. bumping for others ika nenu oka 2 hrs sleeping sestanu bye | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8307 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
bumping ika poi sleeping seyyali | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2478 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
kaliyugam lo dharmam 4 padala meeda nadavatam emiti?? comedy sethunnava?? vanaja kakapothe jalaja success ayyi vuntadi.. | ||
Movieanalyst Side Hero Username: Movieanalyst Post Number: 2477 Registered: 03-2008 Posted From: 122.164.221.215 Rating: N/A |
annayi.... oka merlapaka muralee krishna levello rasthunnav kadaa | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8306 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
Taanu entagano kashtapadi nagpur trip last minutelo cancel cheyinchukuni vesina plan subbarao athram tho cheda gottadu ani aame ippatiki clearga grahinchindi. aa time lo tana kallalo okka sari choosina athaniki paristiti ardhamayyunedi aadapilla anthakanna emi chebutundi ? aa amthram kuda teginchani kurradu parama waste. Asala ilantivadi to nijamga emanna jarigi unte aa guilty feeling to tana bathukuni naa batukuni nashanam chesevaadu .. ala jargaka podam tana adrushtam ani aame grahinchindi vanaja ippatiki kooda pathivrate Dharmama nalugu padala meeda nadustondi | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8305 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
eluru station lo kindaki digi Subbarao ki bye chheppina Vanaja mellaga nadustondi .. okka sari kopamto kuduna nirliptatato navvukundi .. tana chetiloni athani address phone numbers unna business card ni chimpi track meedaki visirindi .. mellaga auto ekki alichinchindi .. Athani to taanu nijam enduku cheppaleka poindi ? ani anukundi .. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8304 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
Rathriki rathri mellaga battal saddukuni tana oorellipoyadu Subbarao ippudu papathumudu Taruvatha tandri to cheppi paichaduvua peruto inko ooru poyadu akkada military lo cheradu IPKF time lo Srilanka velladu .. military lo chani poina tana toti soldier vithantuvune adarsha vivaham cheskunnadu.. Subbarao ippatninchi puneethudu Hyderbadlo settle ayyadu . Tanaki iddaru pillalu. kaani vizag lo tanagurunchi janalu emanukuntunnaro teleedu .. anduke evariki kanapadakoodadu anukunnadu .. Train rajamundry lo agindi tanu bathroomi velladu .. tirgi seat ki vastunte aame kanipinchindi .. Ascharyamaina voice lo Subbaro nuvvena ani adigindi? Takshnam chachi podam aipinchindi tamayinchukuni vanaja gaaru ela unnaru ani adigadu adi kooda kallalo sootiga chudaleka .. Aame mamooluga mattadindi innellu subbarao emi chesadu? family vivaralu anni adigi telsukundi . Ramantham subbarao gurinchi inka talchukuntunnadu ani cheppindi subbarao badhani taggiddamemo ane tapana aamelo subbaraoki kanapadindi subbarao ki oka vishayam choochayaga ardamayyindi anukunnantha damage jaragaledu .. thank god aame tana gurinchi manchigaane alochinchindi anna dhairyamvachindi. Chala thanks andi naagurinchi evariki chheppananduku .. Chala alochinchanu aa roju naa pravarthana meeda naake asahyam vesindi .. anduke discipline lo undali ani military lo cheranu .. ani tana vishayalu mellaga cheppadu .. Aame chirunavvuto tappul cheyyadam manava sahajam asala nuvvu tappukooda cheyyaledu alantivi evi manasulo pettukoku .. asala okkasari nuvvu orrninchi poyyi raka poyesariki andaru nannu adigaru emi cheppalo kooda telvaldu .. edo parents ni choodali anipinchi velli poi untadu ani sardi cheppanu .. Tarvatha ramantham gaaru nee chaduvula gurinchi enquiry chesaru le ani cheppindi Okalla ki okallu address lu fone numberlu ichu kunnaru Subbarao ki oka20 years tirigi vachinattayyindi .. Jeevithamlo antha manchi roju vastundi ani anukoledu .. aame mellaga elurlo digi poyindi pillalto kalisi iddaru aadapillalu chala andamga unnaru teenage lone anukunnadu subbarao. Bye cheppi seatki poi utsaham ga padukunnadu.. ika eppudaina tana familyni vizag teeskuni ravali anukunnadu | ||
Pops Junior Artist Username: Pops Post Number: 87 Registered: 01-2010 Posted From: 24.34.24.3 Rating: N/A |
EK.. Story is excellent. You have awesome skills. Continue.. time unte kwaling seyyi ivvala | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8303 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Subbarao mellaga lopaliki velladu .. Rojulaga chirunavvuto aame kallaloki choodadam sadhya padaledu .. Appudappudu tala paiki ethi max time nelani chustoo SK movielo herolaga mattada sagadu coffee cup teeskuntunnapudu rendu moodu sarlu chetulu tochi sesadu . aame kappulu sink lo padayyadaniki tana pakkaninchi nadustu veltunnappudu athani drishti aame nadumu kani kanapadanattuga unna boddula meeda padindi .. edo yadruchikamga nadum touch chestunnattu action suddenga nadum meeda cheyyi vesadu .. kaani aame kallalo chhoodaleka poyadu .. bhayamto okkasari chetulto gattiga pattukunnadu .. anukunnadokati ayyindokati .. Aaame gattiga chetulu vidilinchindi .. "sayanthrame ila chestunnavu ante rathriki ela rechipotavo ardhamayyindi Rathriki najoliki vachavante nee pani cheptanu" ani gattiga andi okka nimusham lo oopiradaka agathamlo koorukunnatlaindi .. aame venaka ninchi pilustunatlu anipinchina paruguna tana gadilo cheradu .. Tana tandri caduvu paruvu prathishta anni kalla mundu rellala tirigayi .. Ippudu ee vishayam aame valla ayana ki chepte chalu tana bhavishyath oohinchukolekunnadu.. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8302 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: |
vanaja tana jeevitam loki ala vastundi anukoledu .. Tanu ammayilo korukunna prathi lakshanam aame lo unnayi .. aa andam/Dressing sense aa matakari tanam aa chanuvu anni unnayi .. okkate problem aame tana pakkavatalo untunna bank lo Sr ayina ramanatham gaari bharya avadam .. Nijaniki tanaki kooda alanti ammaye kavali valla relation lo vethiki pettali ani aame to kalasina 10 rojullone subbarao cheppadu .. Ramanatham ki Subbarao back ground athani pravarthana chala ishtam. Subbarao lanti discipline unna kurradina aa rojullo evadoo undadu ani cheptundevaadu.. Vanaja ki Subbarao tochala chanuvuerpadindi .. Subbaro khaali time lo ramantaham intlo undi caroms chess lantivi aame/Subbarao lato adutundevadu .. Konni vanaja sparsha tagultuundedi .. modata daani lite ga teeskunna tarvatha konchem durada start ayyindi subbarao ki touch ayinappudalla aame chirunavuto tanavanka choodatam lantivi konta protsahanni ichayi. idi ila undaga oka sari ramanatham bank meeting panimeeda Nagpoor vellalsi vachindi .. Vanaja last min lo vontlo baaledu taanu sasemira Nantha dooram raanu kavalante putintiki next day veltanu ani cheppi manesindi .. Ramanatam ooru poyemundu Subbarao to tana bharyani puttintiki bus ekkinchamani cheppi velli poyadu.. Subbarao station ninci intiki vachadu .. Atani manasu dadadada laduthondi .. ee rojemjarugutondo assala ardam katalledu .. Anni kalisi vastunnayo leka chhedaadaniki vastunnayo telvatledu .. Vanaja ontariga pakka vata taanu ontarigaa ivathali vaata ela gadustundo ardham kaledu .. inka sayamkalam kaledu ... Vanaja pilichindi coffee tagudugaani raa ani.. | ||
Dma Junior Artist Username: Dma Post Number: 259 Registered: 11-2009 Posted From: 98.167.233.85 Rating: N/A |
Ippati daka ok. next | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8301 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
20+ yrs back ghatanalu alochinchadam modal pettadu. aame gurinchi kooda alochinchadam modal pettadu . Tanu ala chesi undakoodadu tappu chesadu papatmudu ane feeling A/C compartment lo chalini marinta penchindi. . oka chinna incident tana jeevitanni marchestundi ani kalalo kooda anukoledu. Subbarao uth lo vizag lone andagadu spuradhroopi appude Bank lo kotha ga join ayyadu .. Subbarao tandri oka head master subbarao koothurla to baate ni manci discipline lo penchadu . Paruvu pratishta ante pakuladevaadu. Subbarao manchi andagadu telivaina vaadu matakari anni manchi gunalu undevi kaani ammayila to mattadali edo cheyyali ane feeling modatlo teenage lo tene teegalaga tolachina entokonta orchukunnadu. Subbarao intipakkana senior lu Jr lu ani lekunda andaru ammayili ataniki line esevalle .. Subbarao akkala kosam ani vachi athanni tega kavvinchevaru .. appudappudu chinna chinna touching chesevaru ichevaru .. Danto subbarao ki tana meeda kontha confidense undedi kaani talli/tandri Subbarao ni eppudoo gamanistune undevaru kavadamto jagratha ga masalu kone vaadu. Kondarammayilu ayite edo touching ichamu kabatti atanu tamani preminchi untadu ani letters rayadam chanuvu ga mattdatam lantivi chesaru .. Kani subbarao akkalu alanti yathnalani moggalone tunchesevaaru. tammunni vipareethamga kapadukunevaaaru. Tarvatha college lo chinna chitaka romance lu jarigina athanu peddaga commit kaledu .. Udyogam techukunte tana family paruvu pratishta shoopinchi oka rambha lanti pellanni techhi chestaru ani telsukunnadu .. Already akkalu cuttupakkana tanaki line esina chinnappati ammayilu subbarao ki tega pelli ututti sambandhalu choostundevaru.. Subbarao parents mathram kodukki 26 vachaka pelli cheyyochu inka 3 yrs agochu ani lekkalu eskunevaaru.. | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8300 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
Subbarao aa Vizag vachi almost 20 + years ayyindi. Tanu akkadiki vastanu ani anukoledu kaanee raka tappaledu. Subbarao militarylo konnallu panichesi retirement teeskuni oka security company start chesi baaga abhivrudhi chesadu . Bharya pillalu sangham lo oka hoda unna vyakti. kaani kevalam Hyderabad varake parimithamayyadu .. Kaani sontha vooru ayina Vizag ki ravadaniki jankuthadu ... ivala tappaledu .. Business pani meeda Top official ni kalvadam kosam Vizag vachadu .. Athani kallu mathram telisina vallu agupadatharemo ani choostune unnayi . time gadachi poindi vachina pani jarigindi . Hyderbad vellenduku ardharathri Train ( konark) ekkadu. Adi kooda kevalam Vizaglo moham evariki choopinchhakoodadu ani aa time enchukunnadu. Train ekkina Subbarao ki tana seat mundara coupe lo kitiki lonci bayataki choostoo oka avida kanipincindi .. aame Vanaja kaadu kada? Okka kshanam venu tirigi podama anukunnadu .. kaani poi mellaga padukunte pothundi .. aame mathram ayi undaka povacu anukuni dhairyamga ekkadu ventane berth ekku padukunnadu .. Aame | ||
Eluri_kurradu Side Hero Username: Eluri_kurradu Post Number: 8299 Registered: 02-2008 Posted From: 173.30.2.223 Rating: N/A |
varam kritham jarigina dikkumalina wheezing debba to nidra pattatledu. madhyalo leste oopiri checking cheskuntunaa .. Antha baane undi kaani bhayam poledu .. Sarleoka story cheptanu .. review sesi pettandi .. ee story credit lo oka 25% mathrame naadi ayundocu.. nijaniki oka jarigina/chadivina kathalaki konchem twist icha ante.. |
